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Hero
i shall prepare a skin for you
package of flesh to meet your flesh
in this space we needn’t speak of love
in a darkened room i ask not for forever
but for your face between my legs
my body aches to be taken
somewhere far away and hidden
to distant times and places
at the table where you feast hungrily
you needn’t lift a finger
ask of me what you will
i am yours to command
no prop is too great
no scene too outlandish
the friction of our bodies
shall create novels
your voice fingers
the dripping cunt of my brain
the drugs cause a tightness in my head
a clarity sharp and hot
it feels real
it feels like you to me
i want you inside every orifice
sucking you in and holding you there
till the sky turns black
and the stars fade into nothingness
all this
all of me
i need you to own
let me gorge upon you
your hot breath at the glass of my neck
my tits are pages yearning to be read
nipples form bold-faced shivering words
that pucker for the braille of your hands
splay me open for your pleasure
for there is power in a man
who makes a woman want to be a whore
on your back
turned away from me
i’ll make you a hero
package of flesh to meet your flesh
in this space we needn’t speak of love
in a darkened room i ask not for forever
but for your face between my legs
my body aches to be taken
somewhere far away and hidden
to distant times and places
at the table where you feast hungrily
you needn’t lift a finger
ask of me what you will
i am yours to command
no prop is too great
no scene too outlandish
the friction of our bodies
shall create novels
your voice fingers
the dripping cunt of my brain
the drugs cause a tightness in my head
a clarity sharp and hot
it feels real
it feels like you to me
i want you inside every orifice
sucking you in and holding you there
till the sky turns black
and the stars fade into nothingness
all this
all of me
i need you to own
let me gorge upon you
your hot breath at the glass of my neck
my tits are pages yearning to be read
nipples form bold-faced shivering words
that pucker for the braille of your hands
splay me open for your pleasure
for there is power in a man
who makes a woman want to be a whore
on your back
turned away from me
i’ll make you a hero
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2nd Feb 2015 2:57am
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3rd Feb 2015 11:12am
the friction of our bodies
shall create novels ...
Wow! I love the book like metaphors in this ... pages ... braille - Who says book worms can't have fun.
Bravo!
shall create novels ...
Wow! I love the book like metaphors in this ... pages ... braille - Who says book worms can't have fun.
Bravo!
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4th Feb 2015 1:39am
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3rd Feb 2015 11:51am
and good morning! i really enjoyed the book metaphor. it was written extremely well and made this book lover smile. good on you, toni!
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4th Feb 2015 1:41am
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2015 9:51pm
Brilliant write, Toni.. i don't even know where to start.. incredible imagery, and wordplay.. the metaphors are brilliantly executed.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
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4th Feb 2015 1:43am
Dave, thank you so much, your compliment really makes me feel good. I really appreciate you reading.
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5th Feb 2015 6:31pm
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6th Feb 2015 8:48pm
Thank you so much for your warm and encouraging comment, amari. I really appreciate you stopping by... :)
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10th Feb 2015 3:00pm
Vivid imagery! A very deep expression. Made me want to take of my glasses and put on my cape... Sshh, don't tell anyone... jj
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28th Feb 2015 1:03pm
Around here a hero is a very tasty sandwich with lettuce, tomato and mayo, on top of a thick layer of roast beef, between two freshly baked round buns sprinkled with sesame seeds on top... yum!!! JJ
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7th Mar 2015 8:55pm
Thank you Marks. Sorry it took so long to respond... Appreciate you taking the time to read my piece.
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