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To Become Death’s Child
Oh Death Angel…descend upon me and snatch me, let me be stripped bare.
This sea, this frozen land of sorrow, no more can I bare…
With Pain and grief I have been crushed with. My glow has left me. I am numb – I do not feel. A creature so undone by the raw cruelty of life have I finally become.
Oh Death Angel…will you not be my savior? And deliver me ever so kindly and softly from this wretched world. I ask…must I endure more? How much more violence and gore can this pathetic, torn, broken body and spirit succumb to?
My beautiful Dark Angel, grant me your deep eternal sweet kiss of death, as thou shall finally take me in your arms of darkness and doom…where I shall gently fade, wither, and perish away, and take flight into the unknown with thee…and become your endless beloved dark child.
This sea, this frozen land of sorrow, no more can I bare…
With Pain and grief I have been crushed with. My glow has left me. I am numb – I do not feel. A creature so undone by the raw cruelty of life have I finally become.
Oh Death Angel…will you not be my savior? And deliver me ever so kindly and softly from this wretched world. I ask…must I endure more? How much more violence and gore can this pathetic, torn, broken body and spirit succumb to?
My beautiful Dark Angel, grant me your deep eternal sweet kiss of death, as thou shall finally take me in your arms of darkness and doom…where I shall gently fade, wither, and perish away, and take flight into the unknown with thee…and become your endless beloved dark child.
Published 31st Jan 2015
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31st Jan 2015 10:51pm
31st Jan 2015 11:25pm
Thank you! I'm glad you love it :)
Did you have a favorite part that you particularly liked/loved?
Did you have a favorite part that you particularly liked/loved?
1st Feb 2015 2:06am
"where I shall gently fade, wither, and perish away, and take flight into the unknown with thee"
I find some level of comfort in this line, A glorified acceptance in place of bland resignation, it's hopeful in a silver lining sort of way, makes the mystery seem just that; a mystery.. a chance of something more.
I love the language used throughout this piece by the way, The flow is pleasing.
Good write
Be Happy
I find some level of comfort in this line, A glorified acceptance in place of bland resignation, it's hopeful in a silver lining sort of way, makes the mystery seem just that; a mystery.. a chance of something more.
I love the language used throughout this piece by the way, The flow is pleasing.
Good write
Be Happy
1st Feb 2015 2:24am
A darkly glorious poem indeed! I loved it, and found it to be an interesting, prayer-like work of great and profound artistry. The part that touched me the most was the last part, which reads:
"My beautiful Dark Angel, grant me your deep eternal sweet kiss of death, as thou shall finally take me in your arms of darkness and doom…where I shall gently fade, wither, and perish away, and take flight into the unknown with thee…and become your endless beloved dark child."
Having lived many lives and been reborn, yet retaining always the full memory of all my past incarnations, my lives, my deaths... I find that this part of your poem hits home to me in countless ways. Its' depth calls to me and that is the mark of great writing indeed! Masterfully penned. :)
"My beautiful Dark Angel, grant me your deep eternal sweet kiss of death, as thou shall finally take me in your arms of darkness and doom…where I shall gently fade, wither, and perish away, and take flight into the unknown with thee…and become your endless beloved dark child."
Having lived many lives and been reborn, yet retaining always the full memory of all my past incarnations, my lives, my deaths... I find that this part of your poem hits home to me in countless ways. Its' depth calls to me and that is the mark of great writing indeed! Masterfully penned. :)
Thank you for your wonderful input Jessica!
I touches me that my work made an deep impact on you. Additionally, I find it incredibly fascinating that you remember your past lives and found accuracy in my poem! I believe in past lives and that we choose to come back for further learning and advancement. I have always had this memory, clear as day, of myself being on a beautiful shore having a peaceful moment which was short lived by a gargantuan tidal wave! My brother has the same memory, and he thinks that we experienced the catastrophe which occurred in Atlantis eons ago.
I touches me that my work made an deep impact on you. Additionally, I find it incredibly fascinating that you remember your past lives and found accuracy in my poem! I believe in past lives and that we choose to come back for further learning and advancement. I have always had this memory, clear as day, of myself being on a beautiful shore having a peaceful moment which was short lived by a gargantuan tidal wave! My brother has the same memory, and he thinks that we experienced the catastrophe which occurred in Atlantis eons ago.
