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Creepy Girl
There’s a little creepy girl who mad at the whole world. Do you know what it all about? Are you brave enough to find out? She smiles darkly saying things you never heard as she laughing she take out her sword. She about make you doubt there nothing left to figure out. She wickedly as she turns around slicing the air till there blood everywhere. She has a little gift and she loves to sing aren’t you wondering?
Published 30th Jan 2015
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30th Jan 2015 1:27pm
There are many spelling errors. It seems as if either this was a first draft or English isn't you're primary language. The errors in the text often made me confused about what you were trying to state. Work on that. Not trying to be mean, just constructive criticism.
30th Jan 2015 7:24pm
thank you for your comment. but I did spell check and grammar check if it not right I'm sorry but if it hurts your eyes then maybe you shouldn't read it!
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