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If I were paper...
...To the poet,
I'd gracefully
allow the ink's spit
if I were the blank canvas
an' 'pon my alabaster skin
poetry, I would welcome
come unto thee, sink deep in
if I could allow the verse
to relay the poet's soul intent
like the perfect storm, hand
n' pen...bleed til spent
would it be a release
of a heart shred in two
or might it just vent
a mighty rage thru
n' thru?
or perhaps an expelled lust
from the poet's mental thrust
or would he simply trust
the muses soothes a mental-US
if I were the paper
n' you the poet
i'd honor your vision
in any manner you'd
decide to show it...
I'd gracefully
allow the ink's spit
if I were the blank canvas
an' 'pon my alabaster skin
poetry, I would welcome
come unto thee, sink deep in
if I could allow the verse
to relay the poet's soul intent
like the perfect storm, hand
n' pen...bleed til spent
would it be a release
of a heart shred in two
or might it just vent
a mighty rage thru
n' thru?
or perhaps an expelled lust
from the poet's mental thrust
or would he simply trust
the muses soothes a mental-US
if I were the paper
n' you the poet
i'd honor your vision
in any manner you'd
decide to show it...
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Re: If I were paper...
29th Jan 2015 5:04am
or perhaps an expelled lust
from the poet's mental thrust
or would he simply trust
the muses soothes a mental-US
POW ! what a statement!!! Strong and convicted!!!
Love this Po, u go on now!!!
Love Zazzles your sis xoxox
from the poet's mental thrust
or would he simply trust
the muses soothes a mental-US
POW ! what a statement!!! Strong and convicted!!!
Love this Po, u go on now!!!
Love Zazzles your sis xoxox
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re: Re: If I were paper...
29th Jan 2015 1:44pm
Aaaawwww thank you my beauty!
Love you too uhm sis ( hope u don't mind incestousness! Lol)
But truly, greatly appreciate your support always :)
Love you too uhm sis ( hope u don't mind incestousness! Lol)
But truly, greatly appreciate your support always :)
Re: If I were paper...
29th Jan 2015 4:06pm
look at that! that is what i'm talking about. Love this ink!! keep it up sir mind ninja lol
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re: Re: If I were paper...
29th Jan 2015 8:09pm
Aaaawwww there's my sweetness! :)
Thank you lady, I'm happy you liked n yea
I kinda 'haveta' keep it up becuz I'm an ink addict! lol
Thank you lady, I'm happy you liked n yea
I kinda 'haveta' keep it up becuz I'm an ink addict! lol
Re: If I were paper...
29th Jan 2015 8:11pm
Poe so skillfully and beautifully written my heart embraced by this ink :) with love Crim
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30th Jan 2015 4:26am
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31st Jan 2015 11:02pm
re: Re: If I were paper...
1st Feb 2015 00:13am
Thanks bro. Just so u know I lifted from ur drawer in the back room... It was pretty n smooth looking so I couldn't help myself lol
Re: If I were paper...
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Feb 2015 2:27am
1st Feb 2015 5:01am
Poet.....you're always such a clever crafted ink spill.....never ending talent.....luv it.....xo :)
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re: Re: If I were paper...
1st Feb 2015 9:03am
Aaaawwww got me all blushed up here my dear! lol
Thank you sweetie for your kind words n ur continued support
I truly appreciate it ;)
Thank you sweetie for your kind words n ur continued support
I truly appreciate it ;)
Re: If I were paper...
3rd Feb 2015 00:30am
re: Re: If I were paper...
3rd Feb 2015 4:44am
Thank you, I'm happy you liked it n truly appreciate your words
of support :)
of support :)
Re: If I were paper...
3rd Feb 2015 2:26pm
Strangely stirring, a paper's perspective, or is it? Really enjoyed your musings.
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re: Re: If I were paper...
3rd Feb 2015 2:38pm
Yup it is strange, especially how it always seems
to beckon to the pen with 'come hither' glare lol
Thank you, greatly appreciate your thoughts n time :)
to beckon to the pen with 'come hither' glare lol
Thank you, greatly appreciate your thoughts n time :)
Re: If I were paper...
3rd Feb 2015 2:41pm
Ha, what kind of paper are you using, 'come hither glare' gave me a silly girly giggle. There's another poem in there somewhere. Pleasure was mine. :)
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