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Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
my mind takes
me to a magical place
where winged creatures take flight
into the azure skies
we communicate telepathically here
not seen with human eyes, unless you have the sight
a dreamy place
where maidens frolic
fairies dance bedecked in natures finest
sunflower skirts and daisy dresses
sparkling chainmail
for the warriors
there are many different magic folk here
if you look hard enough
they're enchanting
wielding strong magic
come dance a jig
deep in the forest
careful though
their desire to keep you in a reel forever
sprinkling you with fairy dust
these are the faye fairies
very mischievous creatures
they love to play
their Mistress a dark queen
who loves to torture
beware if you enter their fortress
they're dangerous
come and stay awhile
dance, sing and be merry
though don't stay too long
you may get lost
the Mistress of the place
may decide to turn you into a frog
wouldn't that be funny
watching a frog dance all day long
me to a magical place
where winged creatures take flight
into the azure skies
we communicate telepathically here
not seen with human eyes, unless you have the sight
a dreamy place
where maidens frolic
fairies dance bedecked in natures finest
sunflower skirts and daisy dresses
sparkling chainmail
for the warriors
there are many different magic folk here
if you look hard enough
they're enchanting
wielding strong magic
come dance a jig
deep in the forest
careful though
their desire to keep you in a reel forever
sprinkling you with fairy dust
these are the faye fairies
very mischievous creatures
they love to play
their Mistress a dark queen
who loves to torture
beware if you enter their fortress
they're dangerous
come and stay awhile
dance, sing and be merry
though don't stay too long
you may get lost
the Mistress of the place
may decide to turn you into a frog
wouldn't that be funny
watching a frog dance all day long
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re: Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
26th Jan 2015 4:22am
Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
Lady Crim, this started off as sweetly idyllic but I suspected there might be a catch. Things became progressively darker, ending with Mr. Frog dancing a jig under orders from his Mistress. That may or may not be a happy ending. Depends on the Mistress, and whatever mercy she might finally grant.
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26th Jan 2015 4:28am
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26th Jan 2015 4:57am
Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
Anonymous
26th Jan 2015 8:33am
I know that place, Crim...a lovely, dreamy tell of the magic, and a friendly warning about staying too long!
great visuals and meter. Enjoyed the read.
much love to ya :) x
great visuals and meter. Enjoyed the read.
much love to ya :) x
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re: Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
26th Jan 2015 8:37am
Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
Anonymous
26th Jan 2015 11:27am
This is so enchanting, I share your love and visions of the fairy folk. Such a magical moving piece my beautiful sister 😘
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26th Jan 2015 8:25pm
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2015 11:29am
This is so enchanting, I share your love and visions of the fairy folk. Such a magical moving piece my beautiful sister 😘
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2015 11:51am
Masterly, can see them fairies unfolding wings...
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26th Jan 2015 8:25pm
Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
26th Jan 2015 2:54pm
I really love this - I want to go there, in fact I want to live there :-)
Even if I was turned into a dancing frog - it would certainly be so much better than here
excellent ink as always :-)
Even if I was turned into a dancing frog - it would certainly be so much better than here
excellent ink as always :-)
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26th Jan 2015 8:39pm
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26th Jan 2015 6:30pm
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Re: Faye Fairies Mystical Creatures
27th Jan 2015 8:32pm
Cute Piece Crim. Interesting to see a bit of darkness creep in at the end. The happiness and enchanting sweetness orchestrated by an overarching sadistic Queen.
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12th Sep 2015 2:49am
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