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Secret place
Come join me in our world
The world that is us
The world I want only you to see
Come join me where the sun shines upon your face
where the birds dance as the music plays
Come join me here where the heart beats
The blood pumps and our souls get lost in space
Come join me in this warm embrace
Where love is never lost and distance fades
Come join me for one day
A day that no sun can set upon
Come join me in our world
In our world
Our own secret place
The world that is us
The world I want only you to see
Come join me where the sun shines upon your face
where the birds dance as the music plays
Come join me here where the heart beats
The blood pumps and our souls get lost in space
Come join me in this warm embrace
Where love is never lost and distance fades
Come join me for one day
A day that no sun can set upon
Come join me in our world
In our world
Our own secret place
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Re: Secret place
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2015 10:49am
This is a beautiful write, you have great talent sweetie. Welcome to DU! :)
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Re: Secret place
22nd Jan 2015 11:02am
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22nd Jan 2015 11:44am
Re: Secret place
22nd Jan 2015 5:31pm
This could be a companion write to "The Last Day of Summer." But this one's far more romantic. Fine work, Lana.
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Re: Secret place
23rd Jan 2015 6:14am