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...And if ever, I...
...And if ever I...
Whenever I think, I...
couldn't miss you more
there goes my eyes
as they search the blue skies
Whenever I begin to wonder...
where's that angel I adore?
an unexplained melody,
her name sounds like a lullabye...
An inclusion...like a necessary rib
I knead you inside my sole
for you all the riches I would give
nestin' your form, into my stronghold...
However I try to mightily
to express... verbiage fails
to appropriately define...
whenever I hope...
I can't expect answers to find
whichever is preoccupied most,
the heart or mind...
Whenever I turn, wherever I search
I always hang on to hope's design
it's pon your heart I'll always perch...
Yet, if ever I need to breathe
of you the most...you are the soul
to which my body, it hosts...
Whenever I think, I...
couldn't miss you more
there goes my eyes
as they search the blue skies
Whenever I begin to wonder...
where's that angel I adore?
an unexplained melody,
her name sounds like a lullabye...
An inclusion...like a necessary rib
I knead you inside my sole
for you all the riches I would give
nestin' your form, into my stronghold...
However I try to mightily
to express... verbiage fails
to appropriately define...
whenever I hope...
I can't expect answers to find
whichever is preoccupied most,
the heart or mind...
Whenever I turn, wherever I search
I always hang on to hope's design
it's pon your heart I'll always perch...
Yet, if ever I need to breathe
of you the most...you are the soul
to which my body, it hosts...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 18th Jan 2015
| Edited 27th Jan 2015
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Re: ...And if ever, I...
Anonymous
18th Jan 2015 3:40pm
sad and lovely...nice writing, poetik
always a pleasure :) peace
always a pleasure :) peace
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 4:02pm
Miki, my sweet beauty... I treasure you. Thank u so much
for your unwaivering support... :)
for your unwaivering support... :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 4:10pm
wow! this was Absolutely Beautiful Poetik..
fav lines:
"An inclusion...like a necessary rib
I knead you inside my sole" ahhh Simply Splendid..and an excellent metaphoric play on words "knead" -need,"sole"- soul ...adds a rich depth to the beautiful melancholy of this ink,
truly enjoyed!!!
fav lines:
"An inclusion...like a necessary rib
I knead you inside my sole" ahhh Simply Splendid..and an excellent metaphoric play on words "knead" -need,"sole"- soul ...adds a rich depth to the beautiful melancholy of this ink,
truly enjoyed!!!
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 5:14pm
My sweetness... I thank you graciously
n completely, you honor me n I appreciate you sincerely :)
n completely, you honor me n I appreciate you sincerely :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 5:15pm
Won't touch ONE heart huh? lol
Oh well at least your opening was deeply sweet lol
jk... I know what u meant :) thank u my dear
Oh well at least your opening was deeply sweet lol
jk... I know what u meant :) thank u my dear
Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 6:52pm
"Whenever I think, I...
couldn't miss you more
there goes my eyes
as they search the blue skies"
oh Poe, this hits far too close to home today...
... heartbreakingly beautiful
couldn't miss you more
there goes my eyes
as they search the blue skies"
oh Poe, this hits far too close to home today...
... heartbreakingly beautiful
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
19th Jan 2015 3:10pm
My sweet mami, always you warm my heart with your
praise n support, I'm so very grateful for you... :)
praise n support, I'm so very grateful for you... :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 7:33pm
re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
19th Jan 2015 3:15pm
Aaaawwww well I love ur wonderful support
n I thank you incessantly for it! :)
n I thank you incessantly for it! :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 8:21pm
An inclusion...like a necessary rib
I knead you inside my sole
I like these lines. They made me smile.:) Poetik.
I knead you inside my sole
I like these lines. They made me smile.:) Poetik.
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
19th Jan 2015 3:37pm
I'm very happy you did feel this, that's a big compliment my dear n I thank u truly... :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
18th Jan 2015 11:43pm
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19th Jan 2015 3:38pm
Re: ...And if ever, I...
Anonymous
19th Jan 2015 3:02am
Sweet Poet......these words are so felt......my heart is beating wildy in my chest to feel your words ache......truly hope you find who again......so beautiful and breathtaking.....xo :)
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
19th Jan 2015 3:40pm
Thank you my sweetness, sadly I doubt that will ever happen
but I'm happy you enjoyed this spill...
but I'm happy you enjoyed this spill...
Re: ...And if ever, I...
27th Jan 2015 2:21am
When most read this, I imagine they think of someone they are in love with. A relationship beyond physical intimacy.
When I started to read it, it instantly reminded me of the first time I was away from my son. I am not sure if that sounds strange, I've never loved anyone as much as I do him. He makes me feel complete. But anyways, I adore this!
When I started to read it, it instantly reminded me of the first time I was away from my son. I am not sure if that sounds strange, I've never loved anyone as much as I do him. He makes me feel complete. But anyways, I adore this!
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
27th Jan 2015 2:50pm
Nothing strange about what you said sweetheart
but that kinda of love is admittedly different
still, I hear you n agree, there's NO one I love
more than my lil girl! thank u so much for
reading n commenting it means a ton to me
n I appreciate you :)
but that kinda of love is admittedly different
still, I hear you n agree, there's NO one I love
more than my lil girl! thank u so much for
reading n commenting it means a ton to me
n I appreciate you :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
1st Feb 2015 4:28pm
Every line is so beautiful, poetically speaking, very well painted and delivered. Love thats unbound.
Browsing through your poems. Your work is very eclectic and I like that versatility. I will enjoy reading more of you, thank you for sharing this.
Browsing through your poems. Your work is very eclectic and I like that versatility. I will enjoy reading more of you, thank you for sharing this.
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re: Re: ...And if ever, I...
2nd Feb 2015 2:19am
Thank you precious heart, u made my heart flutter
N I truly appreciate ur sweetness n support :)
N I truly appreciate ur sweetness n support :)
Re: ...And if ever, I...
2nd Feb 2015 8:34pm
Beautiful Po U grab her don't ever let her go!!
Loves you to death Boo Boo <3
((((((((((((((Po))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxox
Loves you to death Boo Boo <3
((((((((((((((Po))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxox
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