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Pandora
Pandora opens up her box
Her scent rises in the air
Travels far and pours through locks
And wafts quickly up each stair
The village studs all catch a whiff
Their noses start to twitch
Dreaming dicks then turning stiff
To the aroma of fresh witch
Ceiling struck with streams of cum
Drip on waking wives
Who smack their spouses on the bum
Then dash off for kitchen knives
Pandora tries to break the spell
And sweetly shuts her thighs
But 'tis 2 a.m. and all is hell
So she just lies back and sighs...
Her scent rises in the air
Travels far and pours through locks
And wafts quickly up each stair
The village studs all catch a whiff
Their noses start to twitch
Dreaming dicks then turning stiff
To the aroma of fresh witch
Ceiling struck with streams of cum
Drip on waking wives
Who smack their spouses on the bum
Then dash off for kitchen knives
Pandora tries to break the spell
And sweetly shuts her thighs
But 'tis 2 a.m. and all is hell
So she just lies back and sighs...
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Re: Pandora
Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 8:03pm
Take two..giggle :P
Sir Crow,
Love it! Such fluent gentle erotica.
I was thinking of doing a piece on Pandora's box or jar as I know it...quite quite different from yours but strange connection all the same.
Lady Muse
Sir Crow,
Love it! Such fluent gentle erotica.
I was thinking of doing a piece on Pandora's box or jar as I know it...quite quite different from yours but strange connection all the same.
Lady Muse

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re: Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 8:32pm
Lady Muse,
I'm glad you enjoyed this. I thought it might be a little silly. It is, but it was fun to write. I'm glad it's fun to read. Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed this. I thought it might be a little silly. It is, but it was fun to write. I'm glad it's fun to read. Thank you!
Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 8:17pm
Hell hath no greater fury than a wife scorned by Pandora's box. I hope she has somewhere safe to hide.
Fantastic flow Crowfly, a great fun erotic adaptation of this myth.
Fantastic flow Crowfly, a great fun erotic adaptation of this myth.
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re: Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 8:33pm
Thank you, Frank. I obviously took some liberties with Pandora. I hope she doesn't mind.
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re: Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 9:59pm
Sounds fun! I wish I could get Pandora to jump into my lap. Thank you, Schiitaryn.
Re: Pandora
Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 10:58pm
the retelling of this myth is quite good. i enjoyed its....crassness. :) good one, crow!

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re: Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 11:02pm
Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 11:13pm
Now that's an interesting take on Pandora. That got me laughing though...I know...I got a bizarre sense of humour. You are talented Crowfly. :)
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re: Re: Pandora
17th Jan 2015 11:19pm
Thank you, Grace. My sense of humor's bizarre almost to the point of hysteria. Any similarities to the actual Pandora are purely coincidental and not grounds for legal action.
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17th Jan 2015 11:51pm
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18th Jan 2015 1:01am
Thank you, Bizarro. I'm glad this is good for a few laughs. That's all I'm asking.
Re: Pandora
18th Jan 2015 5:52am
this [in part] reminds me of the first time i was introduced to a dear friend... bitter-sweet memories indeed.
i think pandora would giggle as much as i did reading this. another steller addition crowfly xo
i think pandora would giggle as much as i did reading this. another steller addition crowfly xo
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re: Re: Pandora
18th Jan 2015 6:26am
Re: Pandora
25th Jan 2015 5:49am
The village studs all catch a whiff
Their noses start to twitch
Dreaming dicks then turning stiff
To the aroma of fresh witch << Sick!!!
you sick prick I love your mind!! This is so inciting, so evocative!!! wow Marry me :D
Zazzles xox
Their noses start to twitch
Dreaming dicks then turning stiff
To the aroma of fresh witch << Sick!!!
you sick prick I love your mind!! This is so inciting, so evocative!!! wow Marry me :D
Zazzles xox
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re: Re: Pandora
25th Jan 2015 4:39pm
Calling me a "sick prick" is really praise, for which I thank you, Zazzles. You've got a lusty sense of humor!
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25th Jan 2015 6:52pm
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25th Jan 2015 6:58pm
Thanks! I just hope I can live up to it. I don't consider myself the heroic type. Not a coward. Not quite a clown. Something in between. I'll try to keep that dark ink spilling, and being glad you enjoy!
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25th Jan 2015 7:03pm
Just continue to be yourself Crow, I luv u just the way you are my friend ")
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