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Cleaning Day
Round and round and round I go
When I drop, hell if I know
I won't drive myself insane
Catastrophizing every pain
I must accept it's up to God
What becomes of this fragile bod
It's truly the good Lord's call
When it's time to take my fall
I just request the chance to cleanse my act
I've made quite a mess, and that's a fact
Sure, it's still in God I trust
But Lord just look at all that dust...
When I drop, hell if I know
I won't drive myself insane
Catastrophizing every pain
I must accept it's up to God
What becomes of this fragile bod
It's truly the good Lord's call
When it's time to take my fall
I just request the chance to cleanse my act
I've made quite a mess, and that's a fact
Sure, it's still in God I trust
But Lord just look at all that dust...
Published 18th Jan 2015
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18th Jan 2015 3:46pm
Wellll...."Ashes to ashes,
and......"--as the words are spoken.
In the end, are we all simply 'swept under the rug' ??
(wonder if He shares your remarkable humor?)
This ending had me smiling...right out loud!
Imaginative Ink--Indeed, Mo Chara!!!
and......"--as the words are spoken.
In the end, are we all simply 'swept under the rug' ??
(wonder if He shares your remarkable humor?)
This ending had me smiling...right out loud!
Imaginative Ink--Indeed, Mo Chara!!!
18th Jan 2015 5:13pm
Thank you, Enchantress. I'm sure He does have a sense of humor. If He didn't I'm sure I wouldn't be here.
18th Jan 2015 4:31pm
18th Jan 2015 5:15pm
Anonymous
18th Jan 2015 5:22pm
Sir Crow,
Good rhyming, would like to say more but I feel I might offend, and that would not be my intention dear friend.
Lady Muse
Good rhyming, would like to say more but I feel I might offend, and that would not be my intention dear friend.
Lady Muse
18th Jan 2015 5:31pm
Lady Muse,
You don't need to worry about offending me. Say what you will. I can take it.
Sir Crow
You don't need to worry about offending me. Say what you will. I can take it.
Sir Crow
Anonymous
19th Jan 2015 10:31am
Sir Crow,
I have pm you, I was in a strange one yesterday my friend.
Lady Muse
I have pm you, I was in a strange one yesterday my friend.
Lady Muse
18th Jan 2015 6:48pm
it helps to take stock in the hidden corners of our psyché from time to time
this is deep, crowfly & it takes tremendous courage to dig into parts of ourselves we'd rather ignore, let alone share. bravo!
this is deep, crowfly & it takes tremendous courage to dig into parts of ourselves we'd rather ignore, let alone share. bravo!
18th Jan 2015 7:01pm
Thank you, Katja. It's still pretty difficult for me to share with absolute honesty. I'm working on it.
18th Jan 2015 8:18pm
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19th Jan 2015 6:36pm
I feel like i fight gods will each and every day.
"I must accept it's up to God"
true
"I must accept it's up to God"
true
19th Jan 2015 9:33pm
29th Jan 2015 6:33am
Collate my sins. Reflect, then alphabetize them. Redemption is an archivists curse.
22nd Feb 2015 00:11am
I have to tell you this made me laugh, I so get it :) so clever are you Mr. Crow...
I enjoyed this look at self and ponder, you are so good.... well said my friend....
Love
Zazzles xoxox
I enjoyed this look at self and ponder, you are so good.... well said my friend....
Love
Zazzles xoxox
