Dead

powerful feeling, nearly dominant although it seems to speak of letting go of control or surrender. I love the raw feel and your usual way with injecting every line with evocative emotion that can grab me in a real way. The piece feels a bit like the protagonist is torn or confused, maybe uncertain or tired
but, that is how it speaks to my soul
as always, enjoyed
hugs xx

thank you beautiful Miki for your very lovely and insightful comment.. hugs you back with love Crim :)

I get that feeling of emptiness quite frequently.  Waiting it out has worked.  So far.  These hollow intervals seem to be getting longer.  You've found inspiration, however demonic.  I just don't think you need to do any channeling.  You're imagination is fiery enough, Lady Crim.

thank you Sir Crow I will wait it out :) with love Crim

So much sadness and despair, don't give in to it beautiful lady, by this ink alone you have shown your unique qualities..your words shine out no matter what mood you are in. Your demons have not deserted you, they are showing u how to have faith in your own work from all you have been taught. You are amazing, you just need to accept that sweetie

thank you lovely one for being so beautiful and inspiring.. my demons are probably pissed that I deleted the last poem they inspired.. love you Brenda :)

a lovely but sad exposition of despair - you really are a skilled wordsmith

:-)

thank you kindly David with love Crim :)

You are a true talent, Crim.  

thank you graciously with love Crim :)

dark, gritty & relatable, all in your signature balls to the wall style of delivery. your honesty is always awe inspiring, lovely one xoxo

thank you beautiful one for showing this ink and me love.. with love Brenda :)

Evocative evocation! Visions pulling forward through a wicked fog ridden miasma swarm my mind. Stepping from shadows is never taken lightly!. I love this poem.

thank you beautiful Angel for touching my heart and making me smile :) with love Crim

thank you lovely lady for the insightful and beautiful comment :) with love Crim

a dark angel pulling fiercely at her chains, in an atmosphere of incarceration...

thank you John for the great poetic comment :) with love Crim

Dont let it win my love, you know it always loves you, the devils spawn is always watching you , you mustn't let it inside...
Great dirty and raw exposure Crim
keep writing!! I loved this...
Zazzles xoxoxox

thank you so much beautiful Zazzles love Crim :)