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Boadicea
Looking back at the paths I've traveled
abandoned little one at the age of three
momma on the streets at fifteen
a junkie chasing my fix
the rotating doors of the psych ward
at times feeling so alone
though you were there Mother Earth
rejuvenating and rebirthing my soul
with your oceans deep cleansing me with each wave
the forests a sacred and safe place
for me to take shelter in
slumbering on the mossy bed you provided
your great mountains the breasts of the Earth
from which my being suckled
you fed and sheltered my broken spirit
giving it peace
"For Miki's it's your thing comp."
inspired by this music
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RB64c9Uxgz4
abandoned little one at the age of three
momma on the streets at fifteen
a junkie chasing my fix
the rotating doors of the psych ward
at times feeling so alone
though you were there Mother Earth
rejuvenating and rebirthing my soul
with your oceans deep cleansing me with each wave
the forests a sacred and safe place
for me to take shelter in
slumbering on the mossy bed you provided
your great mountains the breasts of the Earth
from which my being suckled
you fed and sheltered my broken spirit
giving it peace
"For Miki's it's your thing comp."
inspired by this music
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RB64c9Uxgz4
Published 14th Jan 2015
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just need to get off the grid mam
i'm takin it back to the motherland,center,wearing a loin cloth and all.
good thoughts lady....
14th Jan 2015 5:21pm
14th Jan 2015 5:20pm
This was a Poignant and
heartfelt write Brenda.
Had some Melancholy
in it also.
Pan
heartfelt write Brenda.
Had some Melancholy
in it also.
Pan
14th Jan 2015 5:33pm
14th Jan 2015 5:22pm
Viewed as an offering, this is a tale of having overcome and now having something to offer.....back. Looking up the sheer face of the picture, the sea offers this salty taste of its richness....beingness is its own reward....very powerful poem.
14th Jan 2015 5:33pm
14th Jan 2015 5:23pm
This kind of visualization works so well in times of trouble. It shows a kind of courage. Well done, Lady Crim!
14th Jan 2015 5:34pm
Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 5:39pm
I feel this to my core you beautiful lady of light. Such hardships no child should ever endure :'( Taking comfort in our Mother and those that have been there keeps us going, makes us stronger and in the end we are better people and can help so many others.
You are a perfect gift to all you touch, you inspire me my Sister. I love u
You are a perfect gift to all you touch, you inspire me my Sister. I love u
14th Jan 2015 5:42pm
thank you beautiful one for getting this write and embracing me in your love.. I love you too lovely one.. so grateful for you :) love Brenda
15th Jan 2015 00:06am
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15th Jan 2015 4:52am
Crim I have been reading! Just not a lot of time to comment . But I have not missed a poem. You're my girl. Love to see how you're doing. And I see the talent is still so good.. Xoxo
15th Jan 2015 8:30am
thank you beautiful Gg for the lovely comment and making me smile :) with love Crim
15th Jan 2015 6:23am
This is v.inspiring Crim, looking back the immense deaths amidst loneliness still rejuvenating in the selfless supreme lap of Nature mother! Classic write n gleams the courage within..shine on dear lady xx:)
15th Jan 2015 8:31am
thank you Uma for such a beautiful comment touching my heart :) with love Crim
15th Jan 2015 10:07am
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16th Jan 2015 5:34pm
Beautiful words, Brenda.
Physical and symbolic, artfully entwined.
No matter the difficulty, natures healing
balm is always sufficient.
You know what I'm sending, :)
Chad
Physical and symbolic, artfully entwined.
No matter the difficulty, natures healing
balm is always sufficient.
You know what I'm sending, :)
Chad
16th Jan 2015 5:43pm
