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Simple "Hello!"
I have found a place where my spirit soars
it's right inside my dreams of desires for you
where waterfalls chant a song just for us
no longer does my soul weep to be luved
yours constantly sends mine kisses
even in silence of darkness I feel you
never alone wandering down lonely dark corridors
of this broken unwanted miserable heart
cause luv you have for me lights the way
life has new meaning of sharing sacred dreams
shimmering rain upon my tongue I taste you
as heaven sends soft kisses from your lips to mine
our tears join to intimately kiss each other's souls
smiling hearts brings passion beyond ever known
spiritual union started by a simple "Hello!"
each night we walk along the waters edge holding hearts
watching our sexy reflections laughing and singing
"sweetest thing I know is luving you"
it's right inside my dreams of desires for you
where waterfalls chant a song just for us
no longer does my soul weep to be luved
yours constantly sends mine kisses
even in silence of darkness I feel you
never alone wandering down lonely dark corridors
of this broken unwanted miserable heart
cause luv you have for me lights the way
life has new meaning of sharing sacred dreams
shimmering rain upon my tongue I taste you
as heaven sends soft kisses from your lips to mine
our tears join to intimately kiss each other's souls
smiling hearts brings passion beyond ever known
spiritual union started by a simple "Hello!"
each night we walk along the waters edge holding hearts
watching our sexy reflections laughing and singing
"sweetest thing I know is luving you"
Published 9th Jan 2015
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9th Jan 2015 6:55am
each night we walk along the waters edge holding hearts
watching our sexy reflections laughing and singing : Lovely !!
Hello hello flowergirl ! Hows you doing ?
watching our sexy reflections laughing and singing : Lovely !!
Hello hello flowergirl ! Hows you doing ?
10th Jan 2015 2:48am
Hello Brinda.......great to see you my friend......I'm doing as well as I can be.....hope that all is well with you.....thank you for xoming back my way......always encourages me.....xo :)
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 10:34am
Ahhh as always your sweet words are like tinkling fairy bells to my ears :)
10th Jan 2015 2:50am
Awe Muse......always an encouragement......thank you for the smile upon my page you always leave......xo :)
9th Jan 2015 3:20pm
"shimmering rain upon my tongue I taste you" -beautiful line.
Last two stanzas painted a tranquil picture for me ; )
Always a pleasure to read you mamacita
Last two stanzas painted a tranquil picture for me ; )
Always a pleasure to read you mamacita
10th Jan 2015 2:52am
Sexy Lena.......you make my heart smile......I'm so glad you stil enjoy......thank you for your friendship and support thru eveything......xo :)
9th Jan 2015 5:16pm
Ahhh, ES.
Lovely lines. (dual meaning) *evil grin*
Beautiful piece. (oops I did it again) ^..^
xo
Lovely lines. (dual meaning) *evil grin*
Beautiful piece. (oops I did it again) ^..^
xo
10th Jan 2015 3:02am
Ooooo EV......LOL!!! always look forward to your "evilness" upon my page......thank you my friend.....sending corruptive thoughts back to ya xo :)
9th Jan 2015 5:18pm
a very beautiful erotic lovely Flower I could get lost in your sensual ink with love Crim :)
10th Jan 2015 3:10am
Sweet Crim......you have brought tears to my soul......thank you my friend.....xo :)
9th Jan 2015 11:28pm
"Shimmering rain upon my tongue I taste you!" A beautiful line in a beautiful poem, Flower. The water imagery is breathtaking!
10th Jan 2015 3:14am
Crow.......your words are a blessing to me......I always feel so proud when you stop by and leave your words......thank you for lifting my soul.....xo :)
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10th Jan 2015 3:17am
Hi Fenom.....good to see you.....happy you enjoyed this piece.....it was awesome to write.....thank you.....xo :)
10th Jan 2015 4:02am
to me it often seems
ur poetry erotica is
imaginary
allusions
of what could have been
with some one yet unseen
fragrance of a rose
from pages
long since shelved
on the upper floors
where even angels
if any
fear to tread
what flower gal may I ask
is your dread?
erotica must be
like fire brand bred
but your s s silent instead
ur poetry erotica is
imaginary
allusions
of what could have been
with some one yet unseen
fragrance of a rose
from pages
long since shelved
on the upper floors
where even angels
if any
fear to tread
what flower gal may I ask
is your dread?
erotica must be
like fire brand bred
but your s s silent instead
17th Jan 2015 2:44am
Hey Again......what a wonderful heart felt comment.....at times I truly think you read thru my soul.....beyond words written......thank you.....xo :)
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10th Jan 2015 11:38am
Awesome write
last lines are ill!!
"each night we walk along the waters edge
holding hearts"
this one is damn illest..
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
last lines are ill!!
"each night we walk along the waters edge
holding hearts"
this one is damn illest..
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
17th Jan 2015 2:45am
Thank you my "I'll" friend.......appreciate the smiles upon my page......xo :)
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22nd Jan 2015 1:20am
Awe Sweet S......you're so precious.......you lift my smile beyond the page......thank you for taking time to share your thoughts with me......happy you are enjoying my ink.....xo :)
