deepundergroundpoetry.com
Right At Home
Drifting towards darkness
I begin to slip
Losing my grip
My sanity dwindling
And my terror growing
The descent is rapid with seeming finality
But my lover's here
Right at home
And she catches me gently
Whispering soothing words
Cradling me in her arms
And resting my head on her breasts
Then her hand guiding me into her form of paradise
Where pain is not permitted
And memories of ruin banished
Then, finally, gone.
I begin to slip
Losing my grip
My sanity dwindling
And my terror growing
The descent is rapid with seeming finality
But my lover's here
Right at home
And she catches me gently
Whispering soothing words
Cradling me in her arms
And resting my head on her breasts
Then her hand guiding me into her form of paradise
Where pain is not permitted
And memories of ruin banished
Then, finally, gone.
Published 8th Jan 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 1
comments 18
reads 865
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2015 6:32pm
8th Jan 2015 6:31pm
Sir Crow,
This is such a haunting, beautiful write, volumes of tender sadness. So sweet are your words of love and heartache.
Lady Muse
This is such a haunting, beautiful write, volumes of tender sadness. So sweet are your words of love and heartache.
Lady Muse
8th Jan 2015 6:36pm
Lady Muse,
Thank you. I keep dreaming, and the ruin keeps standing, as it were.
Sir Crow
Thank you. I keep dreaming, and the ruin keeps standing, as it were.
Sir Crow
Anonymous
8th Jan 2015 6:35pm
such a gentle thing to happen after pain and fear. it is a fine woman that can do that. great write!
9th Jan 2015 2:49am
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 2:59am
i do my best. :)thank you.
8th Jan 2015 6:57pm
9th Jan 2015 2:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
9th Jan 2015 2:12am
<< post removed >>
9th Jan 2015 2:52am
9th Jan 2015 2:43am
9th Jan 2015 2:54am
9th Jan 2015 5:08am
"And memories of ruin banished"... Wow, Crow. I wish someone felt this way for me. This is my new favorite of yours. Such tender and aching love and eroticism. Thank you so much for sharing.
9th Jan 2015 11:32pm
9th Jan 2015 6:11am
10th Jan 2015 00:26am
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 8:19am
<< post removed >>
10th Jan 2015 00:28am
29th Jan 2015 4:01am
We fall into homespace when we find the perfect set of arms, the lap that smells right, the breasts and shoulders that don't turn weak when we do. There's strength in vulnerability if you're strong enough to ask for comfort. Close to home, work. Thanks for releasing.
