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wet
In the shower with my guy is hot like pie, started out at my neck it was nice and wet down to my boobies ah it felt like I was in a hot fucking movie, he moves around my button that ain't nothing a little slower a little lower ah baby your hot your in my g spot
Published 7th Jan 2015
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7th Jan 2015 3:35pm
7th Jan 2015 4:16pm
Critiquing your style
If your gonna flow it has to sound
Natural and deliver a relevant message
Love, sex, anger but keep the passion
In it please so many Poets put any thing out
But doesn't mean its Good
If your gonna flow it has to sound
Natural and deliver a relevant message
Love, sex, anger but keep the passion
In it please so many Poets put any thing out
But doesn't mean its Good
7th Jan 2015 8:42pm
Thanks for the tip, I use to write a lot when I was young. Than life happend and I just started back up a few months ago, and I don't have anyone to give me any feed back
re: Re: wet
7th Jan 2015 8:46pm
8th Jan 2015 2:06pm
