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For the love of poison
The snake brings me pleasure
with it's forked tongue as it
slithers down head first
Drenched with it's venom
it came across my petals
giving my sighs wings
I softly sway around it's
thickening head taking
it's beautiful shape
with it's forked tongue as it
slithers down head first
Drenched with it's venom
it came across my petals
giving my sighs wings
I softly sway around it's
thickening head taking
it's beautiful shape
Published 7th Jan 2015
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7th Jan 2015 1:44am
7th Jan 2015 1:46am
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 4:00am
Tommie Lynn,
Is it true if you make eye contact they can be very hypnotizing :-) I'm sure with such a HOT write you have a few coiled and ready to strike!
tornado
Is it true if you make eye contact they can be very hypnotizing :-) I'm sure with such a HOT write you have a few coiled and ready to strike!
tornado
8th Jan 2015 2:29pm
8th Jan 2015 2:29pm
7th Jan 2015 6:53am
What a smoking hot metaphor! Very nice, Tommie. My pet snake even enjoyed, very much, this piece :)
8th Jan 2015 2:30pm
7th Jan 2015 8:25am
8th Jan 2015 2:31pm
7th Jan 2015 11:29am
Tommie, You Seductive snake-charmer!
I bet Yo know just the erotic tune to play
to make one, rise and do Your Bidding.
Hot Write... Pan
I bet Yo know just the erotic tune to play
to make one, rise and do Your Bidding.
Hot Write... Pan
8th Jan 2015 2:32pm
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 1:53pm
Seductive, and beautiful.. A wonderful write..
Dave
Dave
8th Jan 2015 2:33pm
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 10:09pm
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8th Jan 2015 2:33pm
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8th Jan 2015 2:34pm
Anonymous
8th Jan 2015 2:38pm
oh this. i am usually terrified by snakes, but this makes me....lust.
