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Goddess Of Nature
Today I seek to give balm for your soul
lead you down a forested path
where we can listen to the trees
whispering their ancient tales
loving Mother Earth
I hope she kisses you this day
with a lovely breeze
walk with you along side the ocean
entering it's life giving waters
as the waves wash over us
taking away today's pain
I implore the Goddess of this plain
to give you love and light
beautiful one as you walk in nature
believing this will give you peace
lead you down a forested path
where we can listen to the trees
whispering their ancient tales
loving Mother Earth
I hope she kisses you this day
with a lovely breeze
walk with you along side the ocean
entering it's life giving waters
as the waves wash over us
taking away today's pain
I implore the Goddess of this plain
to give you love and light
beautiful one as you walk in nature
believing this will give you peace
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Re: Goddess Of Nature
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 6:22pm
A beautiful way to right such an adoring poem I enjoyed reading it and re-reading it over and over
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3rd Jan 2015 6:23pm
Soothing, uplifting, caring encouragement.
Brenda, you write all things so very well.
I applaud your diverse talent.
Certain I am, this will comfort others in addition to the intended target.
Poetic love,
Chad
Brenda, you write all things so very well.
I applaud your diverse talent.
Certain I am, this will comfort others in addition to the intended target.
Poetic love,
Chad
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re: Re: Goddess Of Nature
3rd Jan 2015 7:46pm
thank you Chad for the lovely comment I hope it soothes the soul that I wrote it for with love Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 6:24pm
a beautiful prayer-like piece that touches my soul...lovely work, Crim
peace n love
peace n love
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Re: Goddess Of Nature
3rd Jan 2015 7:39pm
This is gentle and beautiful, Lady Crim. One detail, though. I believe the "plane" in the last stanza is meant as "plain." I pick a lot of nits.
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re: Re: Goddess Of Nature
3rd Jan 2015 7:48pm
thank you Sir Crow for such a lovely comment and the heads up on my error with love Crim :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 8:07pm
I weep at these most cherished of words, every sentance touched my soul do deeply, my shoulders tremble right now from the release of emotion..thank you for giving me that gift. I love you my beautiful sister, with u through pain and pleasure. May the Goddess bless us both and wrap us in her love xx
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3rd Jan 2015 8:09pm
you're making me cry right now.. I love you so much I wanted to take you where you feel most free with Mother Nature beautiful one.. so happy this gave you release.. love Brenda
Re: Goddess Of Nature
3rd Jan 2015 8:11pm
Very relaxing like floating on big puffy clouds through passages of blue sky on a warm and breezy summer day... jj
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4th Jan 2015 7:09pm
Re: Goddess Of Nature
3rd Jan 2015 9:02pm
This is a Wonderful, selfless
Invocation unto the, "Goddess
of Nature," on behalf of all
Your counterparts Brenda.
You have Offered up and into
the aire, (spiritual realms), a
sweet-smelling Incense that
I'm sure was Received and
Accepted by our, "Alma Mater,"
and then rightly appropriated
unto those Who need it.
Outstanding... "Blessed Be," Pan
Invocation unto the, "Goddess
of Nature," on behalf of all
Your counterparts Brenda.
You have Offered up and into
the aire, (spiritual realms), a
sweet-smelling Incense that
I'm sure was Received and
Accepted by our, "Alma Mater,"
and then rightly appropriated
unto those Who need it.
Outstanding... "Blessed Be," Pan
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re: Re: Goddess Of Nature
4th Jan 2015 7:11pm
Blessed Be Pan I'm so happy you found this pleasing as it came from my soul.. thank you for such a beautiful, heart touching comment with love Brenda
Re: Goddess Of Nature
4th Jan 2015 1:38am
A light and peaceful addition to your many treasures crim. It's nice to see the soft side of you once in awhile..
Beautifully written my darling*
Hugsssss
luv Zazzles xoxox
Beautifully written my darling*
Hugsssss
luv Zazzles xoxox
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 3:10am
Passionate Crim......this is stunning......imagery is beautiful.....I have felt kisses of nature a few times.......your ink has beautifully captured its peace and calmness it yeilds when we stop to listen......enjoyed this soul touching write....xo :)
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4th Jan 2015 7:13pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 3:18am
this is like a beautiful benediction. quite lovely. and...delicate. love it.
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4th Jan 2015 5:00am
infusing all the goodness- light, love, beauty, peace..soothing n a spiritual read Crim.shine on dear xx
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4th Jan 2015 11:38pm
Upbeat indeed. Feeling rather positive this day were we? :)
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
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5th Jan 2015 6:55pm
was for a lovely lady who loves nature.. she inspired me.. thank you for getting the positive vibe of this write with love Brenda :)
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5th Jan 2015 3:13am
Im all about live and wishing others well so this speaks volumes to me very nice work.
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