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On Sunshine
One out of six
Spin the wheel
Lock it tight, cock it back
He's walking on sunshine
Finding happiness
In the bottom of a can
Brain iced over
He laughs maniacally
Into the face of death
Time frozen in place
The piper calls to him
But he can't answer
He doesn't have a death wish
He's just trying to forget
Dying to survive
Spin the wheel
Lock it tight, cock it back
He's walking on sunshine
Finding happiness
In the bottom of a can
Brain iced over
He laughs maniacally
Into the face of death
Time frozen in place
The piper calls to him
But he can't answer
He doesn't have a death wish
He's just trying to forget
Dying to survive
Published 23rd Dec 2014
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Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 9:36am
Love the way u describe your emotions in this..the frozen thing I used recently too. I feel this ink. Great write my friend.
Thanks, Muse. Really appreciate the read/comment. I have been pouring alot of effort into my writing lately, and I really hope it shows. I would be lying if I said that your work and Crim's didn't inspire alot of my latest work.
Rock on,
Sir
Rock on,
Sir
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 1:49pm
Ahh such a sweet thing to say, I'm glad we help but the your ink is all your own and it's fucking awesome my dear! :)
30th Dec 2014 2:28am
You've written a relative
poem here Colten.
I think we have all and are
all probably feeling these
things.
We do all forget; eventually.
"Dying to Survive." My daily
life man.
Enjoyed this a lot... Pan
poem here Colten.
I think we have all and are
all probably feeling these
things.
We do all forget; eventually.
"Dying to Survive." My daily
life man.
Enjoyed this a lot... Pan
30th Dec 2014 4:31am
Thank you very much, Pan. Wrote it about huffing Duster, but I figured anyone with a dangerous addiction would be able to.relate :)
