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Alucard
I wait until the witching hour
Then traverse the moor
Climb the steps into your tower
Then knock upon the door
You welcome me into your bliss
Within your cold embrace
Administer that final kiss
And wrap me in midnight lace
Then you lay back in the dark
In this bleak December
Your tongue catches a drifting spark
From your fire's dying ember
The bell tolls as you shut your eyes
And your modesty encloses
That heady scent between your thighs
As you dream of blood and roses.
Then traverse the moor
Climb the steps into your tower
Then knock upon the door
You welcome me into your bliss
Within your cold embrace
Administer that final kiss
And wrap me in midnight lace
Then you lay back in the dark
In this bleak December
Your tongue catches a drifting spark
From your fire's dying ember
The bell tolls as you shut your eyes
And your modesty encloses
That heady scent between your thighs
As you dream of blood and roses.
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this is macabre [&] at the same time incredibly beautiful.
i adore your poetry crowfly. pen on.
i adore your poetry crowfly. pen on.
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6th Dec 2014 2:26pm
Thank you so much, shadoe. That's high praise coming from someone as gifted with the gothic style as you are.
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6th Dec 2014 2:42pm
There is a dark eroticism to this one hun that is completely irresistible Crow. Ur talent knows no bounds
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6th Dec 2014 2:45pm
Thank you, Belle. I tend to think my talent has limits. I just try to ignore them.
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6th Dec 2014 3:54pm
So beautiful! "...and wrap me in midnight lace" and "as you dream of blood and roses". Excellent use of metaphor. Dark yet warm, full of passion.
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6th Dec 2014 4:49pm
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2014 3:59pm
Dark, delicious and very beautiful. I love your style...captivating!
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6th Dec 2014 4:51pm
Thank you, Muse. I'm glad you're captivated. I'll try not to abuse the privilege.
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6th Dec 2014 5:14pm
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Thanks, Crim. Your work's alluring too. And edgy. You're not afraid of the dark.
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6th Dec 2014 8:35pm
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7th Dec 2014 4:40pm
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6th Dec 2014 10:09pm
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6th Dec 2014 10:37pm
The fact that in such a gorgeously edgy and broody poem you have managed to pull off rhyming couplets, is astounding.
My canines grew a little longer and sharper after reading this...
My canines grew a little longer and sharper after reading this...
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7th Dec 2014 4:38pm
Thanks, Franko. To me trying to come up with a rhyme scheme is fun, almost like working on a puzzle. I just try not to force it.
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7th Dec 2014 8:05pm
Vampirism and romance. This is an interesting poem that can be fleshed out as a short story. :) good read Crowfly.
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7th Dec 2014 8:09pm
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14th Dec 2014 10:05pm
The title caught my attention...but the delicately dark detail of this ink truly held captive my mind...beginning to end,this was Beautiful..love the ending...well done!!
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15th Dec 2014 4:09pm
Thank you, poeticDesire. You might have noticed that "Alucard" is Dracula spelled backwards. I'm glad you enjoyed.
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15th Dec 2014 1:05pm
Classical, sweet and darkly innocent. Thanks for a cool scene, crowfly.
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15th Dec 2014 4:10pm