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Nasty Living
"Looking out my window as the rain falls
Sitting here butt naked with no fucking draws,
"The unwashable shit stains make them obsolete
That's why I tossed them in the filthy street,
"They say littering is considered a crime
But also selling pussy and a motherfuckin dime,
"I really don't see anybody pushing the issue
And the ones that do, stuff your mouth with tissue,
"Roaches constantly crawling across my crusty feet
While I rub my balls and massage my meat,
"Living in poverty doesn't even bother me
Now I'm standing in front of the window-while I pee,
"Right on the bum below, in a straight line
Just more piss added to her already shitty behind,
"But for two dollars my ass she'll lick
Or all day ride my wrinkled dick."
Sitting here butt naked with no fucking draws,
"The unwashable shit stains make them obsolete
That's why I tossed them in the filthy street,
"They say littering is considered a crime
But also selling pussy and a motherfuckin dime,
"I really don't see anybody pushing the issue
And the ones that do, stuff your mouth with tissue,
"Roaches constantly crawling across my crusty feet
While I rub my balls and massage my meat,
"Living in poverty doesn't even bother me
Now I'm standing in front of the window-while I pee,
"Right on the bum below, in a straight line
Just more piss added to her already shitty behind,
"But for two dollars my ass she'll lick
Or all day ride my wrinkled dick."
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2014 6:05am
Poverty has its perks.
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4th Dec 2014 8:11pm
A bleak but very colorful
scene you've painted
here Casket.
You've got some imagination
or experience to write from.
Pan.
scene you've painted
here Casket.
You've got some imagination
or experience to write from.
Pan.
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16th Dec 2014 3:55pm
When you travel the world you see things you thought you would never see. It's nasty out there.
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2014 8:32pm
nasty can be sexy .. and it's here ...
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16th Dec 2014 3:56pm
I feel you, but finding the one to be nasty with is the treasure hunt within itself.
Re: Nasty Living
5th Dec 2014 1:17am
Observational and very dirty. This would make some readers horny if they are craving for an action. Great work, CasketSharpe!
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5th Dec 2014 1:18am
this was fabulous. I think I have those same heels....shhh dont tell anyone. ;)
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16th Dec 2014 3:59pm
Next time we will just rent a room so the only thing we would be wearing is our birthday suits. Lol!
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2014 9:34am
Eww now that's minging lol..great ink
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16th Dec 2014 4:21pm
Grisly and wonderful. The language seems carefully chosen and evokes a visceral reaction in the reader. Excellent!
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