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The Raggedy Man
The threadbare people huddle
Their breath puffs of fog
Their skin icing over
Once in awhile a body found in the park
Stumbled upon by a pampered child
A pup who cannot yet comprehend
Assimilate freezing cruelty and neglect
His parents lead him away
Telling him the raggedy man is only sleeping.
Their breath puffs of fog
Their skin icing over
Once in awhile a body found in the park
Stumbled upon by a pampered child
A pup who cannot yet comprehend
Assimilate freezing cruelty and neglect
His parents lead him away
Telling him the raggedy man is only sleeping.
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Re: The Raggedy Man
2nd Dec 2014 4:07pm
Wow. Imagery evoked is tremendous. Scary a bit. Death of a homeless man too. Good read, Crowfly.
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re: Re: The Raggedy Man
2nd Dec 2014 4:15pm
Thanks, Grace. I don't see how anyone can just turn away. "Get a job," they say. Not quite that easy.
Re: The Raggedy Man
2nd Dec 2014 4:26pm
this poem made me very sad I see the homeless all the time in these parts.. a very compelling heart wrenching write Crowfly you have a beautiful soul with respect Crim
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re: Re: The Raggedy Man
3rd Dec 2014 3:48pm
Thank you so much, Crim. There's a lot of homeless around here in Pasadena, CA too. There's one very effective outreach program called Passageways. I just wish there were more such programs, and I wish they had greater funding. There's also Pacific Clinics and the Pasadena Housing Authority. They've helped me immensely.
Re: The Raggedy Man
2nd Dec 2014 8:23pm
Yes, so very sad, but I agree, we cannot just pretend we don`t see. And we shouldn`t lie to our children. Powerfully written, Crow.
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re: Re: The Raggedy Man
3rd Dec 2014 3:50pm
Thank you, Silva. Looking away, lying to others and ourselves just perpetuates the pain, and the problem isn't going anywhere. It's growing.
Re: The Raggedy Man
3rd Dec 2014 8:00am
written w/a steady hand & a heavy heart. perfect scene for the coming holidays...
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re: Re: The Raggedy Man
3rd Dec 2014 3:52pm
Re: The Raggedy Man
3rd Dec 2014 8:05am
The last line is the bandaid we tell for how society could end up this way at all if any grown ups were really in charge. Thanks for writing this, crowfly!
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3rd Dec 2014 3:55pm
Re: The Raggedy Man
4th Dec 2014 7:55am
and one day, the bubble pops... reality floods in & the sheltered drown.
really great ink crowfly
really great ink crowfly
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4th Dec 2014 2:33pm