The Beast

Poem, leading to thoughts, like isn't there anything/anyone to protect her?.. And what are the reasons of her rapture, 'all unknowing', or 'fully aware'... Just to think about. Beautiful poem.

The rapture is on the part of the beast.  He's entranced by the "child-woman" and doesn't know what to make of her mystery.  She's ambiguous, a figure on the border of innocence and experience.  She's a beautiful complexity.  She isn't frightened, just eyes wide open.  The beast is simply a beast, and he's in awe.

Dark and beautiful...

Thanks, Muse.  Once your eyes are used to the darkness, what wonders to behold!

shall we start addressing you as Humbert Humbert [?]
words fail to describe how i love to loath this piece of yours crowfly & how i'll be returning to this discomfitting write for a second & third dose.

Touche.  I love fully mature women.  I was thinking in terms of evil perplexed by innocence, not really turned on. I didn't say anything about her sexuality, nor his. I'm glad you're coming back for more, but I hope you're not disturbed.  

Mmmmmm Crow......nice mysteroius ending to this......entranced by e feel I got from this spell binding write....enjoyed...xo :)

Crowfly I've often read of the beast in Revelations this write gives a new perspective on his relationship with the child woman.. excellent with respect Crim

This feels like metal verse. Fascination with the unfamiliar I understand.

Brave write crowfly.