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Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
She was actin' like
some kinda hot whore
a 'shot' mess
droopin' breasts
primpin' pimpin'
for hard dicks
on the floor...
Still...it
had him
wantin' to explore
searchin' for
a lil' somethin' more
but the habit
of a 'cheddar' addict
go for the green
at any cost, n' that lost
intuitively is conducive
to this 'sporadic
attraction...'
Yet, those
erratic eyes
battin'
blinkin'
got him
thinkin...'
drinkin'
in the scent
of her confusion,
a collusion alludin'
to sinful acts
causin'
a contusion
in his usin'
preceptions
of this
half-hearted
fake politedness...
but he sees
clearly in the night
somethin's not right
it's quite a fright
to witness
how mixed up
a wanna prissy missy
might be...
then again,
bitch could just be
truly dizzy...
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Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 3:16am
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2nd Dec 2014 3:21am
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2nd Dec 2014 3:26am
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2nd Dec 2014 3:34am
Thank you my sweetheart! I'm so happy you liked
my twisted ink :)... Truly appreciate you... :)
my twisted ink :)... Truly appreciate you... :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 4:24am
Sometimes we try to look beyond the crappiness. At times we succeed. Good read Poetik.
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re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 11:34am
Yes you're right my dear, n I appreciate your insight
N thank you much for your continued support :)
N thank you much for your continued support :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 5:47am
re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 11:37am
I know it is but sometimes you just gotta go there
huh? Thank you my sweetness I'm so grateful
for your support :)
huh? Thank you my sweetness I'm so grateful
for your support :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 5:03pm
remind me not to make you angry this was a take down of a write.. so well done.. with love Crim :)
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re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 7:38pm
No worries precious lady I'd never even try to
spit venom at you! :) thank you so very much for
your sweet support :)
spit venom at you! :) thank you so very much for
your sweet support :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 8:07pm
re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
3rd Dec 2014 00:44am
It's ok bro. so long as you don't fall, I don't wanna be sued
becuz I'm broke lol... Thanks a bunch bro!
becuz I'm broke lol... Thanks a bunch bro!
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
2nd Dec 2014 8:19pm
re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
3rd Dec 2014 00:46am
Aaaawwww thank you my sweetheart, I'm so honored by your words n support always :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
3rd Dec 2014 00:22am
Ha, loved this spill. Somehow I seem to relate to this, flash backs of the days of clubbing. Diggin the flo
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re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
3rd Dec 2014 00:55am
Thanks bro. I'm happy you enjoyed n yea it came to me as I watched this very 'worn' looking intoxicated
n whatever else she was woman trying to
be sexy to get some attention for 'favors'
made me smh... Appreciate you much
n whatever else she was woman trying to
be sexy to get some attention for 'favors'
made me smh... Appreciate you much
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
3rd Dec 2014 10:27pm
i didnt see the ending coming lol this was on point Poetik...loved it!!!
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re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
4th Dec 2014 6:52am
Well I'm hoping that ending wasn't too harsh for ya my sweetness! :) thank u either way though becuz in always grateful for all ur support :)
Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
5th Dec 2014 3:32pm
re: Re: Sex, Drugs, n the pursuit of Crappiness...
5th Dec 2014 3:35pm
Lmao not so much lol... Thank u my dear, truly n always appreciate your continued support :)
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16th Dec 2014 2:19am