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The Poets' Dance
the bard's song soars
up to the blue sky
a song of joy and happiness
and the dance pulsated
the waves crashed on the shore
the poets rejoice in the liquid
warm over their bodies
they waxed lyrical
some picked up the guitar
some cheered them on
some danced on the sand
others tasted liquid ambrosia
the poets composed epics
as they drank to each other's health
sunset saw them
around the bonfire
Dawn rays would wake them up
once more they dispersed
to corners of their mind
and their imaginings.
up to the blue sky
a song of joy and happiness
and the dance pulsated
the waves crashed on the shore
the poets rejoice in the liquid
warm over their bodies
they waxed lyrical
some picked up the guitar
some cheered them on
some danced on the sand
others tasted liquid ambrosia
the poets composed epics
as they drank to each other's health
sunset saw them
around the bonfire
Dawn rays would wake them up
once more they dispersed
to corners of their mind
and their imaginings.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 27th Nov 2014
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Re: The Poets' Dance
27th Nov 2014 1:16pm
Sounds like a wonderful song n dance to me my friend!
Very nicely composed... :)
Very nicely composed... :)
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re: Re: The Poets' Dance
27th Nov 2014 1:50pm
Well if all of DU members meet it would be a song and dance alright! DU Woodstock...:) thank you Poetik:)
Re: The Poets' Dance
27th Nov 2014 3:27pm
Yes! Poets at their most celebratory! Drinking to each others health with liquid ambrosia! I really like the exultant nature of the first stanzas, then the retreat into creativity, "to the corners of their mind / and their imaginings." Well said Grace. Poets can indeed dance.
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re: Re: The Poets' Dance
27th Nov 2014 3:38pm
I always try to envision all the chatacters here meeting somewhere like a DU Woodstock...it might be a great rush I think in more ways than one.:) thanks for reading me Crowfly. Happy Thanksgiving.
re: Re: The Poets' Dance
29th Nov 2014 00:35am
Re: The Poets' Dance
29th Nov 2014 4:47am
re: Re: The Poets' Dance
29th Nov 2014 5:18am
Re: The Poets' Dance
29th Nov 2014 10:47am
"Once more they dispersed
To corners of their mind
And there imaginings".
It's the writer's way of life..
Beautiful scenario.
To corners of their mind
And there imaginings".
It's the writer's way of life..
Beautiful scenario.
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re: Re: The Poets' Dance
29th Nov 2014 7:16pm
Indeed at times we live in our mind...a story lived stationary. Thank you Dustyjjewels for reading.:)
Re: The Poets' Dance
30th Nov 2014 9:17pm
The Warmth of belonging-such energy creates creativity-Wonderful Write Dear Grace!!!
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re: Re: The Poets' Dance
1st Dec 2014 00:33am
Re: The Poets' Dance
30th Dec 2014 9:32am
"Dawn rays would wake them up
once more they dispersed
to corners of their mind
and their imaginings"
this verse wraps up the piece in one word, Excellent!!!
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
once more they dispersed
to corners of their mind
and their imaginings"
this verse wraps up the piece in one word, Excellent!!!
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
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re: Re: The Poets' Dance
30th Dec 2014 3:16pm