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Morningside of the Mountain
Bring the glitter on bands of gold
blow the shivers of pleasure trove
touch the portal to ecstasy
kiss the yearnings of unfolding blossoms
Watch the dawn blush kissing the sky
cool night air bowing in greeting
feel the sparks of silver lighting
permeates through the body supine
twin peaks tremble with morning dew
sprinkled by heavy magicked wand
shooting stars on velvet curtains
erupting volcanoes roars within
Pegasus gallops across the sky
trailing galaxies of molten stars
trembling constellations in creation
flags the descent of entwined mortals
Waking up on the morning side
of the mountain she smiles
joyful in satiation.
blow the shivers of pleasure trove
touch the portal to ecstasy
kiss the yearnings of unfolding blossoms
Watch the dawn blush kissing the sky
cool night air bowing in greeting
feel the sparks of silver lighting
permeates through the body supine
twin peaks tremble with morning dew
sprinkled by heavy magicked wand
shooting stars on velvet curtains
erupting volcanoes roars within
Pegasus gallops across the sky
trailing galaxies of molten stars
trembling constellations in creation
flags the descent of entwined mortals
Waking up on the morning side
of the mountain she smiles
joyful in satiation.
Published 26th Nov 2014
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26th Nov 2014 2:22am
That's very clever, Grace. I like the imagery in the main body of the poem, "ecstatic" to say the least. Then, at the end of the fourth stanza, we bear witness as "trembling constellations in creation / flags the descent of entwined mortals." And then a mere human female rises and shines, nicely sated, apparently one of those entwined mortals. That's bringing things very nicely down to earth. I wonder if that lady's aware of all the divine activity around her? Probably has enough joy of her own.
26th Nov 2014 2:57am
Thank you Crowfly. Indeed the imagery is contributed to her feelings in her sexual pleasure and her fulfillment. :)
Anonymous
26th Nov 2014 3:54am
Grace,
After such a night of bliss and then to awaken with a smile makes it indeed worth the trek to the top of those trembling twin peaks to feel the power of that volcanos roar! Enjoyed!
tornado
After such a night of bliss and then to awaken with a smile makes it indeed worth the trek to the top of those trembling twin peaks to feel the power of that volcanos roar! Enjoyed!
tornado
26th Nov 2014 7:25am
Hi Tornado.:) such a trek is always worthwhile especially if you fall to earth back on star tracks. Thanks for reading.
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26th Nov 2014 5:52am
A very powerful and magical exploration of bliss and a lovely poetic attempt to convey all of the feelings, emotions, and sensations that such nigh-transcendent bliss can bring about in someone. I love it! Beautiful work, Grace... one of your great poems, that's for certain. :D
26th Nov 2014 7:28am
Jessica dear. You know that experience well. :) Ecstasy at its peak. Thanks so much for always readong me.
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30th Nov 2014 9:48pm
Being One of Wilderness-Awesome, climatic, pure
The Beauty of the two connecting-then observing the aftermath-Humbling
A Most Excellent Write Dear Grace!!!
The Beauty of the two connecting-then observing the aftermath-Humbling
A Most Excellent Write Dear Grace!!!
1st Dec 2014 00:41am
