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Necropolis
Bathed in moonlight
Kissed by mist
A city of night
With stones that list
Granite and graves
I call this peace
My lover waves
My troubles cease
Cold hand in mine
We make our way
'Neath stars that shine
And dread the day.
Kissed by mist
A city of night
With stones that list
Granite and graves
I call this peace
My lover waves
My troubles cease
Cold hand in mine
We make our way
'Neath stars that shine
And dread the day.
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23rd Nov 2014 4:15pm
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23rd Nov 2014 4:24pm
Thanks, Belle. I do like old graveyards, crumbling castles and such. I like gothic horror movies. I could go on and on about those. "Black Sunday," "Blood and Roses," "The House of Usher"......
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23rd Nov 2014 6:00pm
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23rd Nov 2014 6:46pm
Sometimes, I think we're all living, but walking as if we're dead. Profound.
You captured the essence of such, clearly.
You captured the essence of such, clearly.
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27th Nov 2014 00:50am
Thank you, shadow. I think some of us are at least aware of the zombies, and hopefully steer clear.
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24th Nov 2014 5:26pm
this ink gave me a peaceful feeling.. let the darkness shine in all it's diverse beauty.. great write with respect Crim
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27th Nov 2014 00:53am
Thanks Crim. That's exactly right. It's meant to be peaceful. I don't mean to be morbid, but there's so much beauty in an old graveyard. I'm not sure I'd want to be in one alone at midnight, never alone.
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24th Nov 2014 7:42pm
ohh this is simply lovely, crowfly & i must agree with Brenda about the serene nature of this piece. it reads like old world, gothic romance.
loved!
loved!
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27th Nov 2014 00:56am
Thank you, shadoe. I love old world gothic. I could happily move into a crumbling old castle. I'd just bring lots of blankets.
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27th Nov 2014 3:14pm