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I submit these lines to you,
dear reader,
in place of psalm or prayer;
I reveal these lines to you,
poor reader,
& they become your cross to bear:
We are all of us holy
& wholly unaware.
dear reader,
in place of psalm or prayer;
I reveal these lines to you,
poor reader,
& they become your cross to bear:
We are all of us holy
& wholly unaware.
Published 22nd Nov 2014
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5th Feb 2015 2:27am
You are nailing it Boy. Please tell me these are gems you've had a while to polish.
Have you been writing sestinas or other forms?
Have you been writing sestinas or other forms?
8th Feb 2015 2:58am
sometimes i have an idea or think of a line or two that just I really like so i try to think of a way to develop a theme around those original lines. i used to write a lot but fell off for about six years so i think i have a lot of old ideas to purge. i actually didn't know what a sestina was until i just looked it up.
11th Sep 2015 4:44am
