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So Amazing...
So Amazing...
With love...
never truly submitted
to a robust amount
of bovarism...
So, it's amazing
unto thee it
was ever freely given...
Living for the moment
lost...within a frozen
moment in time...
so amazing... a precious
love could ever be mine...
Apocalyptical, this critical
emission...of broken breaths'
resuscitated...
allowing renewed wishes
for what is coveted
to quell emptiness' whine...
How it'd be so amazing
gazing...
at a mystical love
before the end, of a life's time...
With love...
never truly submitted
to a robust amount
of bovarism...
So, it's amazing
unto thee it
was ever freely given...
Living for the moment
lost...within a frozen
moment in time...
so amazing... a precious
love could ever be mine...
Apocalyptical, this critical
emission...of broken breaths'
resuscitated...
allowing renewed wishes
for what is coveted
to quell emptiness' whine...
How it'd be so amazing
gazing...
at a mystical love
before the end, of a life's time...
Published 21st Nov 2014
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21st Nov 2014 12:08pm
21st Nov 2014 1:01pm
21st Nov 2014 12:08pm
21st Nov 2014 1:14pm
B! Hello, I'm ok considering... lol
Thanks for your sweet comment concern n support
I deeply appreciate it :)
Thanks for your sweet comment concern n support
I deeply appreciate it :)
21st Nov 2014 12:13pm
21st Nov 2014 2:24pm
Love your comment sweet Grace, you rock! :)
Thank you my friend, always appreciate you... :)
Thank you my friend, always appreciate you... :)
21st Nov 2014 1:23pm
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21st Nov 2014 1:39pm
21st Nov 2014 2:27pm
Asaaawwwww ur too wonderful my dear K, thank you bunches! Truly humbled for your support :)
May such a magical love find its way to your life!
But am sure you have tasted such purity once or twice!?!Ye?
Beautiful ink!Love the style and the wording!
But am sure you have tasted such purity once or twice!?!Ye?
Beautiful ink!Love the style and the wording!
21st Nov 2014 2:30pm
Thank u sweetness! I'm always looking for that possibility
n who knows when life has a nasty habit of sidetrackin the dream!? lol appreciate u !
n who knows when life has a nasty habit of sidetrackin the dream!? lol appreciate u !
21st Nov 2014 2:47pm
Bro. Poe that was Gr8 man!!
Really like the read!!
Outstanding write!!
Way too show that pen who's boss!! LOL!!!
Sir Lancelott
Really like the read!!
Outstanding write!!
Way too show that pen who's boss!! LOL!!!
Sir Lancelott
21st Nov 2014 4:18pm
Lmao at ur "way to show that pen who's boss"
Too damn funny bro! Truly thank u for the laugh
wonderful comment, n support always :)
Too damn funny bro! Truly thank u for the laugh
wonderful comment, n support always :)
21st Nov 2014 3:14pm
Passion bottled up and spilled through your pen, deep lines as they bleed. Still life pumps with belief, outstanding write
21st Nov 2014 4:23pm
Bro. Truly, you humble me n I'm grateful to have your support
especially being a big fan of your brilliant work! :)
especially being a big fan of your brilliant work! :)
21st Nov 2014 3:16pm
beautifully penned as always, Poe.
"Apocalyptical, this critical
emission...of broken breaths'
resuscitated..."
^^^
loved the images that particular piece evoked
"Apocalyptical, this critical
emission...of broken breaths'
resuscitated..."
^^^
loved the images that particular piece evoked
21st Nov 2014 4:25pm
Mami... Never will I be able to thank you enough
for all your support pretty much from my first day here...
Deeply grateful for you :)
for all your support pretty much from my first day here...
Deeply grateful for you :)
21st Nov 2014 4:39pm
21st Nov 2014 4:43pm
Aaaawwww... Be still my lil heart!
Lol thank you sweetness, I'm flattered n truly thankful
for your support of my ink :)
Lol thank you sweetness, I'm flattered n truly thankful
for your support of my ink :)
21st Nov 2014 9:10pm
Sometimes PM what we want most is right n front of us. All we need to do is truly open our eyes. I hope its there for u darlin
Absolutely beautiful piece
Absolutely beautiful piece
21st Nov 2014 10:12pm
Yes I agree with you my lil southern sweetie pie,
and I'm thinking I may need to sleep less n stay awake longer
so as not to miss anything lol... Thank you do much u lil genius...appreciate you much! :)
and I'm thinking I may need to sleep less n stay awake longer
so as not to miss anything lol... Thank you do much u lil genius...appreciate you much! :)
21st Nov 2014 10:11pm
21st Nov 2014 10:20pm
Thank you Crim, you're the best! I'm grateful
for your very sweet words n truly appreciate you... :)
for your very sweet words n truly appreciate you... :)
22nd Nov 2014 4:10pm
So many of us used the word amazing since it's the first that comes to (Poetic)mind but let me say that it caused me goose flesh because of its beauty.
23rd Nov 2014 2:52am
23rd Nov 2014 4:30am
Thank you, I'm honored to read you thought so!
Truly grateful for your time n thoughts on my ink :)
Truly grateful for your time n thoughts on my ink :)
24th Nov 2014 5:08pm
this was Beautiful and Heartfelt...Wonderfully crafted ink Poetik :)truly enjoyed
24th Nov 2014 8:36pm
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14th Aug 2016 5:18pm
I'm ashamed I never saw this til now... If u ever come back I promise to make it up to u... :( thank u for whatever it's may be worth after all this time...
