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I-20/20 vision...
As the 'Mind's eye goes...
I...Sinistral me, progressively
strolling through a mentality
cast, in steeled application...
Lingering, like clouds that
smothered insecurity...
inciting a mass horripilation
The soul, heart, and mind
run amok, in a gossamer
of varying complications...
When man, woman,
and child seek to
understand the complexities
of what 'being human' is...
In such
a kickshawed civilization...
I...Sinistral me, progressively
strolling through a mentality
cast, in steeled application...
Lingering, like clouds that
smothered insecurity...
inciting a mass horripilation
The soul, heart, and mind
run amok, in a gossamer
of varying complications...
When man, woman,
and child seek to
understand the complexities
of what 'being human' is...
In such
a kickshawed civilization...
Published 14th Nov 2014
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14th Nov 2014 12:38pm
14th Nov 2014 1:12pm
14th Nov 2014 1:02pm
love the term, "a kickshawed civilization..."
George Benson's tune, "20/20", came to mind
George Benson's tune, "20/20", came to mind
14th Nov 2014 1:13pm
Yes I admit that word kinda made me chuckle when I first heard it, n now felt like a good time to use it lol
Thanks bro. Humbled n appreciate you...
GB. One of my favs! :)
Thanks bro. Humbled n appreciate you...
GB. One of my favs! :)
14th Nov 2014 1:53pm
14th Nov 2014 2:20pm
Impressed? Wow I got an impressed from you!
I must be getting better lol... Jk... Thank u my sweetness
As always I appreciate your continued support :)
I must be getting better lol... Jk... Thank u my sweetness
As always I appreciate your continued support :)
14th Nov 2014 2:59pm
14th Nov 2014 3:08pm
Oh Mami Mia! lol
Sorry feeling a lil silly lol
anywho, I'm blessed to have your continued support
n forever n always grateful for you :)
Sorry feeling a lil silly lol
anywho, I'm blessed to have your continued support
n forever n always grateful for you :)
14th Nov 2014 9:32pm
15th Nov 2014 00:11am
Aaawww c'mere...muah! lol
Thank u my sweetheart I'm flattered n humbled
by your praise n support :)
Thank u my sweetheart I'm flattered n humbled
by your praise n support :)
16th Nov 2014 9:15am
16th Nov 2014 5:29pm
Hey I don't often do it, but every now n then
I feel compelled to attempt to help others build their vocabulary
within the confines of my lines, because I'm a word addict I try make others addict too lol thank you my sweet one :)
I feel compelled to attempt to help others build their vocabulary
within the confines of my lines, because I'm a word addict I try make others addict too lol thank you my sweet one :)
16th Nov 2014 4:37pm
Poe you have a deep understanding of the human condition it flows from you pen opening eyes excellent with love Crim
16th Nov 2014 5:31pm
Thank u my dear Crim! Though I'm not so sure
I do... what I am is a very questioning mind the rest is God
pours into me what I pour out :)
I do... what I am is a very questioning mind the rest is God
pours into me what I pour out :)
16th Nov 2014 9:07pm
16th Nov 2014 10:07pm
So great to hear from you again Mag... :) thank you I appreciate it. N yea when I first heard if I was like wow
that's an awesome word! then when it came time to incorporate it I decided bam! there u have it lol
that's an awesome word! then when it came time to incorporate it I decided bam! there u have it lol
Anonymous
17th Nov 2014 3:21am
I really enjoyed the read. Something feels familiar here! Kudos!!
17th Nov 2014 3:49am
Something does? As in? I hope u mean it sounds like it's me, becuz I assure u it AINT plagiarized lol
seriously, I'm so happy to hear from u my dear n appreciate u much :)
seriously, I'm so happy to hear from u my dear n appreciate u much :)
18th Nov 2014 3:05am
I had to look up "kickshaw." "An elegant but insubstantial trinket." In a kickshawed civilization, what might these be? All kinds of gewgaws cluttering this landscape, far as the eye can see. Can't seem to find...but never mind. My vision isn't what it used to be. Fine puzzle, Poetikmind.
18th Nov 2014 5:20am
Kickshawed just Felt appropriate
n slightly more polite than saying trifling lol
I'm weird like that... I thank you for your time n thoughts
n will return the favor soon :)
n slightly more polite than saying trifling lol
I'm weird like that... I thank you for your time n thoughts
n will return the favor soon :)
