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Famine
All you desperate poets
Diligently searching for the perfect words
To describe your solitude, melancholy, the knives, the cuts,
Hopelessness, hatred, despondency, disease, death,
Famine of the Soul.
But to me, depression is about
Hitting snooze twenty times on your alarm clock
Because getting out of bed is just….
Too. Fucking. Hard.
Diligently searching for the perfect words
To describe your solitude, melancholy, the knives, the cuts,
Hopelessness, hatred, despondency, disease, death,
Famine of the Soul.
But to me, depression is about
Hitting snooze twenty times on your alarm clock
Because getting out of bed is just….
Too. Fucking. Hard.
Published 3rd Nov 2014
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I was thinking about this concept the other day, how so many people have so much motivation and drive in life: dreams and goals, when sometimes all I want in life is to wake up in the morning and not just want to go right back to bed.
3rd Nov 2014 9:13pm
Yes! That's what I feel too! How great it would be to WANT to get up in the morning. Sigh...
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3rd Nov 2014 8:53pm
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3rd Nov 2014 9:13pm
3rd Nov 2014 10:37pm
I love the words famine of the soul and the last line is fricken excellent! Great work!
4th Nov 2014 1:59am
4th Nov 2014 4:58am
Love how in the first half the diction is so dense and "poetically flashy" while the second half is raw and honest. Great written way to show your point, too.
2nd Apr 2015 6:13am
