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To love her...
Tender...
For want of one
to hold...
so delicate,
a supple body
sweet, slow,
soft kisses along
nape of neck...
eyes interlock
soaring in the dreaminess...
her eyes,
like diamonds' sparkle...
feather touch
applied to lips
a sensual embrace,
encased...
locked into one another
hip to hip, soft kisses
n' nibbles along the
breastbone...
tantalizingly long
wet, lustful licks
on n' across aerolas...
Tender... how thee hold
must be...
a methodical,
agonizingly slow
n' hazy trip
into all the tender,
n' wanton passion
the love of
a heart can show...
For want of one
to hold...
so delicate,
a supple body
sweet, slow,
soft kisses along
nape of neck...
eyes interlock
soaring in the dreaminess...
her eyes,
like diamonds' sparkle...
feather touch
applied to lips
a sensual embrace,
encased...
locked into one another
hip to hip, soft kisses
n' nibbles along the
breastbone...
tantalizingly long
wet, lustful licks
on n' across aerolas...
Tender... how thee hold
must be...
a methodical,
agonizingly slow
n' hazy trip
into all the tender,
n' wanton passion
the love of
a heart can show...
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Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 6:10am
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24th Oct 2014 1:56pm
Aaaawwww you my dear, surely desire it!
Thank u do much sweetheart, appreciate u :)
Thank u do much sweetheart, appreciate u :)
Re: To love her...
PM....you romantic beautiful soul... :):)
such fine words explode with passion, romance and love off the page.... :)
such fine words explode with passion, romance and love off the page.... :)
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re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 2:11pm
Thank u K, ur makin me blush big time! :)
truly n always appreciate your support! :)
truly n always appreciate your support! :)
re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 2:11pm
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 11:39am
This is so tender. Not many men can show a tender side. I'm so glad you do.
Beautiful!
Beautiful!
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re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 2:13pm
Lena, why you sweet talker you! :)
Thanks my friend, your appreciated tons :)
Thanks my friend, your appreciated tons :)
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 11:43am
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24th Oct 2014 3:02pm
Every once in a 'wild' gotta do something
like this I guess lol... Thanks much bro. :)
like this I guess lol... Thanks much bro. :)
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 1:45pm
this has such a wonderful, dream~like quality to it Poe. thoroughly enjoyed
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re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 3:09pm
Always bringing me big smiles u are my dear lady... Truly
grateful for that n you :)
grateful for that n you :)
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 1:46pm
PM darlin this piece is a precious thing of beauty
Very lucky woman to cause a man like u to feel so deeply about her
Very lucky woman to cause a man like u to feel so deeply about her
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re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 3:13pm
Mmmm yea I guess you're right bout that lol
Seriously, you continue to support me n I appreciate so much
my sweetness :)
Seriously, you continue to support me n I appreciate so much
my sweetness :)
Re: To love her...
Anonymous
24th Oct 2014 3:34pm
I felt a little drunk as I read this..lol Could smell perfume and lipstick and feel a warm comfort..love how you paint these verbal pictures :) write on, poetik :)

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re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 6:04pm
Aaaaawwww... My precious Miki... Gosh
I'm so flattered... Thank you so much
sweetness I deeply appreciate you :)
I'm so flattered... Thank you so much
sweetness I deeply appreciate you :)
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 4:48pm
re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 6:05pm
Ha! yea in my dreams I sure was! lol
Thanks bro. Great comment, n I'm grateful
for it n ur support :)
Thanks bro. Great comment, n I'm grateful
for it n ur support :)
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 7:48pm
re: Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 8:06pm
Sadly, no one... Just my over active imagination...
Thank u though my friend, I truly appreciate u much :)
Thank u though my friend, I truly appreciate u much :)
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24th Oct 2014 8:10pm
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24th Oct 2014 8:34pm
Re: To love her...
24th Oct 2014 10:21pm
An absolutely sweet and touching write, Poe. A real journey of tenderness. Like it a lot!
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25th Oct 2014 2:42am
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25th Oct 2014 2:54am
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25th Oct 2014 4:04am
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25th Oct 2014 4:31am
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25th Oct 2014 4:34am
How sweet of you! Well to tell the truth, this is JUST imagination, my oft times dreamy imagination lol
Thank u so much! I appreciate ur thoughts :)
Thank u so much! I appreciate ur thoughts :)
re: Re: To love her...
26th Oct 2014 1:05am
Re: To love her...
26th Oct 2014 1:22am
Sweet Poet......this is stunning......I'm speechless of your graceful and luvng words. Beautiful and touching.....luv the pic. Xo :)
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re: Re: To love her...
26th Oct 2014 11:07am
Thank you my lovely flower, you're a true
sweetie pie in my eye! :) appreciate you always
n forever... :)
sweetie pie in my eye! :) appreciate you always
n forever... :)
Re: To love her...
26th Oct 2014 3:15pm
wow this was Beautiful
this stanzas was the icing on the cake
"a methodical,
agonizingly slow
n' hazy trip " loved it
this stanzas was the icing on the cake
"a methodical,
agonizingly slow
n' hazy trip " loved it
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re: Re: To love her...
26th Oct 2014 4:53pm
Aaaawww my poetic one, you give me big smiles!
Thank you so much, I'm happy you enjoyed
my piece, n appreciate you dearly :)
Thank you so much, I'm happy you enjoyed
my piece, n appreciate you dearly :)
Re: To love her...
28th Oct 2014 6:45am
Dreamy and oh so lovely! Takes me to another dimension these words of passion. Very nicely done.
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re: Re: To love her...
28th Oct 2014 10:54am
Thank you sweet angel, I'm humbled n pleased you
liked this ink n as always I appreciate you much :)
liked this ink n as always I appreciate you much :)