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Three minutes
Three minutes alone
In heaven with myself
Soft music playing
My body all shining from the lotion
smells so good
Can't control it
Can't help myself
Two finger is all it takes
Just to put a satisfied smile on my face
Gotta rub it the right way
Only I can do it like I like
Knowing all my wants
How to make myself moan
Slowly, secretly, Into my folds I go
One finger in nice and slow
thumb on my nub
Moving till my legs start to shake
the music fading away
room spinning
loving these orgasmic spasms
I did them to myself
feeling my insides
Nice soft and warm as all hell
orgasm still shining on my nails
fingers smelling so good
nipples erect from my own love play
Never feeling any guilt
No man can do what I do in three minutes
I'm better then most of you
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gg........
18th Apr 2011 8:08pm
Beautifully Erotic
18th Apr 2011 8:53pm
Three Minutes More
19th Apr 2011 00:33am
It's woman's prerogative to go it alone
Fingers move deftly, don't need to be shown
She knows how to reach her own special place
Better than the other half of the human race
Just three little minutes will make her orgasmic
Inner fire rising in a place that's fantastic
No man can do better with hand or with bone
When a woman has chosen to go it alone.
(I guess I'll have to publish this one, too)
Fingers move deftly, don't need to be shown
She knows how to reach her own special place
Better than the other half of the human race
Just three little minutes will make her orgasmic
Inner fire rising in a place that's fantastic
No man can do better with hand or with bone
When a woman has chosen to go it alone.
(I guess I'll have to publish this one, too)
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19th Apr 2011 3:17am
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19th Apr 2011 4:17am
Whoah!
Anonymous
19th Apr 2011 1:29am
Kinda tingly. Real nice Gg. :)
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hot
19th Apr 2011 5:34pm
Hmmmmmm........
20th Apr 2011 3:07pm
.......a precursor to "A Night In Portugal" perhaps? You are making all of my voyeuristic tendancies surface. Lovin' this one ; )
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SCORPIO
Anonymous
21st Apr 2011 2:11pm
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21st Apr 2011 2:13pm
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2011 7:16pm
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oh yeah
Anonymous
21st Apr 2011 7:19pm
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Yes
22nd Apr 2011 11:39pm
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2011 2:01am
Critique the poem you fucking idiot, flexy. Your opinion regarding someone's choice of subject matter isn't worth jack shit. So you can write about drugs (I saw your poem submission) but someone else can't write about touching themselves? A poem isn't about what it is about. It is about how it is about it. If you had any sense you'd realise that.
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re: re: Yes
23rd Apr 2011 2:27am
Awe thank you jack that was sweet of you I think you said it all I don't even need to say a word thanks ;)
@Flexy
How dare you call anyone such a name you are the pig..and it shows by your words..you disgust me..This poem is a beautiful expression of self love and art..if your too big of a baby to understand that go suck on your pacifier instead of opening your mouth..
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:D
Anonymous
28th Jun 2011 8:07pm
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Sexy ........
Anonymous
28th Jun 2011 8:26pm
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Wow
Anonymous
15th Mar 2012 8:48pm
loved it :) Great hot write :)
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re: Wow
31st Aug 2012 2:37pm
Thanks hun. I need to tidy this one up. To many I's and I see a lot I didn't back then :-)
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31st Aug 2012 12:48pm
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2012 2:59am
Effin love this!!! Yer an amazing writer;)
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1st Sep 2012 3:22am
Re: Three minutes
Great write Gigi :-) honesty through and through. Aha, it's sometimes good to get that stuff down on the paper.
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26th Jan 2013 1:34pm