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Bringing Life to Death
You make the world
look better than it is.
Even dying, you make desirable.
Everybody dies,
though, few know true love.
Even fewer know love,
the way I know you.
I won't waste a single breath,
vowing to honor and cherish you,
for something as common as a lifetime.
When your last beat hears mine part,
Finally our final exhale and finest hour.
The dawn of eternal matrimony:
til death do we start!
look better than it is.
Even dying, you make desirable.
Everybody dies,
though, few know true love.
Even fewer know love,
the way I know you.
I won't waste a single breath,
vowing to honor and cherish you,
for something as common as a lifetime.
When your last beat hears mine part,
Finally our final exhale and finest hour.
The dawn of eternal matrimony:
til death do we start!
Written by
ScarlettA
(Scarlett_A)
Published 2nd Oct 2014
| Edited 4th Feb 2016
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Re: Bringing Life to Death
2nd Oct 2014 7:34am
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3rd Oct 2014 3:54am
Re: Bringing Life to Death
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2014 7:50am
Gooood shit, scarlett..... Glad to see some more material from you
"You make the world
look better than it is."
"for something as common as a lifetime."
"The dawn of eternal matrimony:
til death do we start!"
-choice!
"You make the world
look better than it is."
"for something as common as a lifetime."
"The dawn of eternal matrimony:
til death do we start!"
-choice!
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re: Re: Bringing Life to Death
3rd Oct 2014 3:54am
Re: Bringing Life to Death
2nd Oct 2014 12:30pm
You touch me in a way I could never explain.
Thank you for your poignant words and feeling !
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Thank you for your poignant words and feeling !
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re: Re: Bringing Life to Death
3rd Oct 2014 3:55am
I appreciate your feedback, I've appreciated it every step and all along the way.
re: re: Re: Bringing Life to Death
3rd Oct 2014 2:17pm
You are a brilliant writer. There is real emotion in everything you pen. Love reading you ...
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Re: Bringing Life to Death
2nd Oct 2014 7:09pm
Such a beautiful, touching ink
my sweet friend...outstandingly
expressed... :)
my sweet friend...outstandingly
expressed... :)
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3rd Oct 2014 3:55am
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Re: Bringing Life to Death
3rd Oct 2014 7:55pm
Hey this was a great read. Subtle yet powerful emotion behind the words. Great job.
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4th Oct 2014 11:16pm