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Inbox
There is no wrong or ugly,
only your just and beautiful
but limited lens.
You are not broken,
just peering at yourself
through your self-tinted window.
Infinity is a nose length away.
You have everything you've ever needed
buried in a place between your ears.
You have access to an all-knowing/
intelligent energy that calls you by name
but you forward it to a full inbox.
Wake up,
roll over
and see me, loving you.
only your just and beautiful
but limited lens.
You are not broken,
just peering at yourself
through your self-tinted window.
Infinity is a nose length away.
You have everything you've ever needed
buried in a place between your ears.
You have access to an all-knowing/
intelligent energy that calls you by name
but you forward it to a full inbox.
Wake up,
roll over
and see me, loving you.
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10th Oct 2014 4:42pm
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2014 7:47am
I am seeing this poem as something along the lines of
"stop pouring so much energy into God, who is always too busy, and pay attention to me"
- But I'm drunk, and probably wrong. Can you explain it to me, Scarlett?
"stop pouring so much energy into God, who is always too busy, and pay attention to me"
- But I'm drunk, and probably wrong. Can you explain it to me, Scarlett?
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10th Oct 2014 4:45pm
You're right on. I feel like God/Intelligent energy/ whatever your understanding is, works through all of us and constantly surrounds us. So, if we get caught up in the myths of good and evil/ right and wrong we will miss out on the very thing we're seeking. Xo
Re: Inbox
10th Oct 2014 2:27pm
Ultimate wake up call write
I like how you delivered the message
Some yin yang here
I like how you delivered the message
Some yin yang here
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10th Oct 2014 4:47pm
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10th Oct 2014 5:27pm
I pray in the shower
To nobody in particular
We earthlings are on our own
Religion is for the weak
You want fries with that ?
To nobody in particular
We earthlings are on our own
Religion is for the weak
You want fries with that ?
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11th Oct 2014 00:26am
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14th Oct 2014 8:12pm
This is great.
"You are not broken,
just peering at yourself
through your self-tinted window"-Great Line
I love when you write in a soft voice.
"You are not broken,
just peering at yourself
through your self-tinted window"-Great Line
I love when you write in a soft voice.
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2014 10:58pm
wow
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