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'Astride the Stars of Flight'
He sees her silhouette
beckoning to him
like a virgin moth to flame...
Assuring apprehensive
hearts that possibilities
abound within...
Even if stark reality
continues to wash
away milkyway dreams...
Butterfly kisses sail
on a breeze of wonder,
highlighting exquisite
waterfall rendezvous...'
Two infernally-twined, bound
by inherent desires to be
wantonly filled with the simplest
of all things... freed,
from restrictions and free
to fall into oblivious' release...
beckoning to him
like a virgin moth to flame...
Assuring apprehensive
hearts that possibilities
abound within...
Even if stark reality
continues to wash
away milkyway dreams...
Butterfly kisses sail
on a breeze of wonder,
highlighting exquisite
waterfall rendezvous...'
Two infernally-twined, bound
by inherent desires to be
wantonly filled with the simplest
of all things... freed,
from restrictions and free
to fall into oblivious' release...
Published 1st Oct 2014
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Anonymous
1st Oct 2014 4:02pm
visually stunning and dreamy
nice one, poetik ;)
nice one, poetik ;)
2nd Oct 2014 11:27am
Thank you Miki! as always I'm honored n very grateful for your
continued support of my ink... Appreciate you much! :)
continued support of my ink... Appreciate you much! :)
1st Oct 2014 4:25pm
2nd Oct 2014 11:29am
Aaaawwww your comment was too! Thanks a ton
my lil southern Amiga! lol... Truly, I'm deeply
thankful n appreciative for your support :)
my lil southern Amiga! lol... Truly, I'm deeply
thankful n appreciative for your support :)
1st Oct 2014 4:48pm
2nd Oct 2014 12:39pm
1st Oct 2014 5:23pm
2nd Oct 2014 12:40pm
Aaaaawwe thank you sweetheart! :) truly
n always grateful n I appreciate your support :)
n always grateful n I appreciate your support :)
2nd Oct 2014 2:14pm
"Butterfly kisses sail
on a breeze of wonder,"
well dang Papi
this is something else... i love the lulling visuals in this piece. simply exquisite
on a breeze of wonder,"
well dang Papi
this is something else... i love the lulling visuals in this piece. simply exquisite
2nd Oct 2014 2:52pm
Aaawwww my sweet Mami! Gosh, you gots me blushing again! Thank you so much my dear lady,
truly appreciate you always n forever :)
truly appreciate you always n forever :)
2nd Oct 2014 7:39pm
Splendid Scribe Poetik..great imagery..subtlely sensual..love the ending..Bravo!!!
2nd Oct 2014 11:20pm
C'mere n let me give u a big hug! Thank you
so much my sweet PD... Truly grateful as always!
n I appreciate you much :)
so much my sweet PD... Truly grateful as always!
n I appreciate you much :)
3rd Oct 2014 1:55pm
3rd Oct 2014 9:00pm
Thanks bro. Means a lot to me to have your support.
I truly truly appreciate it n you :)
I truly truly appreciate it n you :)
4th Oct 2014 6:05am
very tender offerings of love, falling among the stars.
that simple & familiar desire...
that simple & familiar desire...
10th Oct 2014 11:24am
Hey I'm sorry bout the delayed reply to your comment
bro. I lost track of things. :( appreciate your support greatly! :)
bro. I lost track of things. :( appreciate your support greatly! :)
6th Oct 2014 5:19am
Quite the setup Po Loving this as always <3
you never disappoint!
Love you!
Broomie xoxoxox
you never disappoint!
Love you!
Broomie xoxoxox
6th Oct 2014 5:26am
Aaawww c'mere...mmmmmmmmuuaahh! you're too sweet u know!
Thank u for all u are :)
Thank u for all u are :)
