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Fountain of Youth
When days are long and
I am worn down and defeated
You bring me back to life
With your loving kiss and sweet words
A resurgence of energy
Shoots through my body
Rejuvenating my soul
You make me feel years younger
Like a younger man
Ready to take on life once again
You are my fountain of youth
I drink you and I am reborn
Another life given to me
By your loving touch
I want to drink you always
And live forever
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
I am worn down and defeated
You bring me back to life
With your loving kiss and sweet words
A resurgence of energy
Shoots through my body
Rejuvenating my soul
You make me feel years younger
Like a younger man
Ready to take on life once again
You are my fountain of youth
I drink you and I am reborn
Another life given to me
By your loving touch
I want to drink you always
And live forever
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 12th Sep 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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13th Sep 2014 00:08am
13th Sep 2014 4:41am
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 4:23am
Gorgeous write of feeling fulfillment from another soul. You write so amazingly. Xo :)
13th Sep 2014 4:52am
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 8:41am
Where the holy water is kept....
13th Sep 2014 5:20pm
13th Sep 2014 5:52pm
Ur happiness n this piece fills my own soul with so much light hun. Fullfillment due to knowing ur n anothers heart is more special than any mere words can express
Grt write darlin
Grt write darlin
13th Sep 2014 7:34pm
13th Sep 2014 6:46pm
Those waters can be addictive to the point you want to drown in them ... Wonderful piece you've written.
13th Sep 2014 7:35pm
13th Sep 2014 8:17pm
I adore the fact that you can proclaim your feelings in this way.
Heartwarming indeed My friend!
I enjoyed this soft write...
Jackie
Heartwarming indeed My friend!
I enjoyed this soft write...
Jackie
13th Sep 2014 8:35pm
My well is full Jackie. A gift I wish upon you my friend. Thank you for your wonderful comments.
14th Sep 2014 9:49am
a beautiful write as always xmar...
she's a lucky woman...but then you're a very lucky man... :)
she's a lucky woman...but then you're a very lucky man... :)
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