Memories...

Great Momories and unfogottable one. Enjoyed

Thank you romanticguy, luv. :-*

I am glad you enjoyed...

Powerful sensual candor given my stamp of approval :) You are good!

Why, thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv! :-*

Your stamp of approval is the seal of quite an aficionado of the sensual world.

I feel especially cherished, luv... :-*

And I didn't mean seem arrogant with the "stamp of approval" I simply mean't that your work drives me to physical action :)

All power
mmmmmm
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Granite, luv :-* ~

Your responses almost invariably make me want to crawl atop you, luv. ;-*

Or, have you pin me under you...

Thank. You. ;-*

Good work, killer ending

Thank you, SugarSkull, luv :-*, although perhaps I should be wary of you, darling, when you say "killer" anything... ;-D

I rather adore you, you know. :-*

Love this work Savaja...but then again I'm a fan of your words...
Your comment to JT and his killer endings...so true...
and he is adorable...

Ahh, GeniusGirl, luv :-* ~

Thank you very much, dear one, though I think it's mutual fandom here, luv ;-*.

He does tend to make one rather tetchy when he talks of killing...

Yet, he IS undeniably charming. ;-*

Your sexy voice brings those erotic memories alive! Very Nice!

Thank you very much, xmar82, luv! :-*

You always make me feel so very appreciated...and sexy, luv. ;-*

You bet ya, Savaja. "Sometimes no other will suffice."
Love the realism displayed, combined with control and
loss of control, an erotic trifecta.
I applaud your exceptional talent(s).  :)

High praise, indeed, VegasPoet, luv :-* coming from you who know quite a great deal about that particular trifecta. ;-*

Thank you very, very much, Sir.

I am humbled and extremely complimented by your acknowledgment (and praise!) of my talent(s). ;-*

heavy artillery. sensuous shock waves like that will last a long time...

Thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*!

Heavy artillery, indeed. :-D I hadn't thought of that, but you put it very aptly, luv. ;-*

And those shock waves, Mmm...

Not bad, it was sexy, raw, passionate however I wouldn't explain why I used a certain word and you didn't build into the climax that well. It was still a good poem and I love the boldness of your write.

MsRockyJackson, luv :-* ~

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate that. You didn't have to do so, but you did and also took the time to comment, for which I'm grateful.

I considered NOT explaining why I used "cunt" where I did; I've used it before and have offered no explanation for it, however, for reasons of my own, I chose to, though I realize it interrupted the flow of the poem quite a bit. I accepted that as the cost of doing that bit of business there. My overall goal was accomplished, so a little flow disruption, I felt I could accept, but I applaud your good eye because it was disruptive, indeed. ;-*

As for climax...

In this piece, my objective was a bit different from other pieces, so I wasn't working toward quite the same sort of, er, explosive finish as I might have been in other pieces I have done. However, again I applaud your perceptiveness because it could have been quite a bit different with some change in strategy.

Perhaps, I'll take another look at this poem and see if I'd like to shift some things around. I appreciate the time you took with this, luv. :-*