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Whispering Wind
The face disappears
In the wind it weaves
Like smoke rising
From the embers
Of the dying flame
Taunting it calls
Whispering your name
A memory of days gone by
Ethereal beauty
Come back to me
The silence is deafening
In my cavernous heart
My fears ring in my ears
Like the whispering wind
Always taunting
Your name
Upon its lips
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
In the wind it weaves
Like smoke rising
From the embers
Of the dying flame
Taunting it calls
Whispering your name
A memory of days gone by
Ethereal beauty
Come back to me
The silence is deafening
In my cavernous heart
My fears ring in my ears
Like the whispering wind
Always taunting
Your name
Upon its lips
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Re: Whispering Wind
24th Aug 2014 9:42pm
Some memories get just more painful the more we recall them. The Whispering Wind brings back longing feelings, never forgotten, always treasured. Touching ...
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24th Aug 2014 10:20pm
Aww the memory of lost love, you've captured the fear and emptiness left behind beautifully.
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24th Aug 2014 11:43pm
Wow how beautiful and thoughtful is this!
I enjoy all of your ink Mar!!!
Write on sunshine!
Zazzles Xxxxx
I enjoy all of your ink Mar!!!
Write on sunshine!
Zazzles Xxxxx
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 00:49am
Heart breaking piece. Beautiful emotions written out by your heart. Hope she returns soon. Xo :)
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 8:59am
Promises and wishes brought by the winds...
Always been fascinated by the wind
Always been fascinated by the wind
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25th Aug 2014 7:18pm
Oh X darlin im sure she is very close by. This piece truly made me feel such pain
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26th Aug 2014 9:24am
I no she thinks of you have you told her your feeling this is beautiful xmar82 and deep all will work out I no it will♥
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14th Sep 2014 4:11am
The wind whispers to me all the time, deary. Sometimes I listen, and sometimes I do not...:)
Great write.
Great write.
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2014 3:17am
The wind does taunt us at times. Liking this a lot. :)
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