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The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
...Like with the U.S. crisis with ISIS
potentially darkening our doorstep
makes one wonder, lord what's next
Or the outrage in our heartland
damn, are you serious another black man!?
Actually more like child
it's criminal how Po Po did their 'job'
with "Hands up... now a life gets robbed
Yea, back to world-wide events
Ebola, striking down victims
with ILL intent, a scourge
for a score of people that's
increasing in the tolls on
the hapless souls' spent
The perversion of incessant
depression in the population
Robin Williams, simply put
the latest, and prominent victim
sad, especially since many treasured him
I'd go on n' on bout the subject
though I'll abstain further reflect
on shit that continues to happen
just know...again soon, the spit
will hit when I git back...
to yapping
potentially darkening our doorstep
makes one wonder, lord what's next
Or the outrage in our heartland
damn, are you serious another black man!?
Actually more like child
it's criminal how Po Po did their 'job'
with "Hands up... now a life gets robbed
Yea, back to world-wide events
Ebola, striking down victims
with ILL intent, a scourge
for a score of people that's
increasing in the tolls on
the hapless souls' spent
The perversion of incessant
depression in the population
Robin Williams, simply put
the latest, and prominent victim
sad, especially since many treasured him
I'd go on n' on bout the subject
though I'll abstain further reflect
on shit that continues to happen
just know...again soon, the spit
will hit when I git back...
to yapping
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Re: The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
Anonymous
16th Aug 2014 4:30pm
You penned the truths here.. I feel like we preach to the choir at times, but even the choir needs to know they're not chanting alone sometimes :) nice work, powerful piece my friend
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re: Re: The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
18th Aug 2014 6:59am
I assure you I never wanna 'preach' yet it is truly important to shine the light in SHIT when it's excreted. lol thank you my sweet one :)
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16th Aug 2014 5:07pm
And nothing to say when good things happen!Most of us are preachers without the calling!Hell! i think i been guilty of spit yapping from time to time,but mostly on the state of my nation,thats when am on the frontline dumping my shit in every media house!Lol!
You have called it as it is Poetik!
You have called it as it is Poetik!
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18th Aug 2014 7:02am
I will never judge you on what you see as a wrong
so preach on sweet beauty, preach on! lol
Oh n thank you so much for ur support :)
so preach on sweet beauty, preach on! lol
Oh n thank you so much for ur support :)
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16th Aug 2014 11:25pm
Spit and shit. Interesting that they are from both end of the human body. Millions will yap but it will be mere sounds when no one listens. Good read there Poetik.:)
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18th Aug 2014 7:10am
Gosh I love how you responded to this my friend! Ur the best :) thank u! :)
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a true poet PM.......
you can turn your pen to anything.....
agree with all you've said....
am glad to have read.....
makes me wish there'd come a time when i could sit with you and share the contents of whats on your mind....
you can turn your pen to anything.....
agree with all you've said....
am glad to have read.....
makes me wish there'd come a time when i could sit with you and share the contents of whats on your mind....
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18th Aug 2014 7:14am
There she is! Yea not bragging but I do agree
I at least try to cover all n anything possible simply becuz I love to be as versatile as I can :) appreciate you :)
I at least try to cover all n anything possible simply becuz I love to be as versatile as I can :) appreciate you :)
Re: The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
17th Aug 2014 4:55am
Poetikmind, luv :-* ~
You speak profoundly and when you do, we take heed. You are powerful, your pen intense, the spit that flows, almighty glows in rows to rouse.
Thank you, luv! :-*
You speak profoundly and when you do, we take heed. You are powerful, your pen intense, the spit that flows, almighty glows in rows to rouse.
Thank you, luv! :-*
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18th Aug 2014 7:16am
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17th Aug 2014 6:46am
Its true ...one tragedy after another. We are destined to just eliminate ourselves. ( I wouldn't mind leveling most of the middle east though- it would be an improvement )
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18th Aug 2014 7:22am
I agree, we DO seem destined to destroy one another
n I'm just gonna say this I understand how u feel my sweetness :)... Thank u so much always for ur support :)
n I'm just gonna say this I understand how u feel my sweetness :)... Thank u so much always for ur support :)
Re: The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
17th Aug 2014 9:31am
preach Papi, preach!
yes, the world has gone fucking crazy to say the least, war, famine, disease, hate crimes... no doubt about it... question is where and how does it end.
a really deep write, Poe, gets me thinking on a lazy sunday morning.
yes, the world has gone fucking crazy to say the least, war, famine, disease, hate crimes... no doubt about it... question is where and how does it end.
a really deep write, Poe, gets me thinking on a lazy sunday morning.
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18th Aug 2014 7:24am
Let the world go fucking crazy n I got an idea...
Let's go fucking crazy, juss u n I mami! lol
Thank u my sweetest one :)
Let's go fucking crazy, juss u n I mami! lol
Thank u my sweetest one :)
Re: The Spit yapping, when Shit Happens...
19th Aug 2014 8:39pm
Your observational pieces come with fire and gut punching...and I love it! Ingenious title....Xo
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20th Aug 2014 00:37am
My sweet Rain how I adore you queen!
Thank you, I as always am humbled n honored
to have your continued support of my musings :)
Thank you, I as always am humbled n honored
to have your continued support of my musings :)
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