Wire-Bound.

That's deep and real very good

Why do YOU get poetic ability?
gimme some >:D

well thanks to both of you,
but i cant be that good, this is day 3 of poem-writing.
thanks for liking it (:

That was a great poem. Im just now starting to write dark poetry, its a good way to vent when you have no one to talk to. This poem was deep though, could feel the meaning.

thank you, its shocking to get support like this (: i didnt think i was any good.

great talent. I need some badly

There couldnt possibly be so much talent in something from the mind of me, haha, but thank you so very much for the support.(:

I think the wording is okay, but the structure seems a bit rough around the edges. There's a lot of places where you look like you wrote it intended for two lines, then decided to turn them into one (for example, "I play my part, On the silver screen.") I think I'd take a look through this piece and take out some of the capitalization and punctuation in the middle of the lines, make it read a little less like every line is actually two smooshed together (for example, "I play my part on the silver screen.") In addition, rhyming poetry can sound better sometimes if the lines have closer to the same number of syllables; for example, the lines "If my beating hadnt been seen,/Perhaps i wouldnt fall victim to this dire routine." seem a little forced because the second line is so much longer than the first. It's sort of like stuffing things into a bag; it gets the job done but it doesn't necessarily look good. Other than all that though I think this piece has potential, and I do like it.

Egh, thank you. Ill fix that.
Ill go get some editing done then,
And i capitalize those purposely,
Im a freak, i know.