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"Undeniable..."
I don't wanna love
though, I can't fight it even if I try
but I got this aching desire
you see, I want to know
just how it feels to fly...
I don't wanna love
because I just can't bear the hurt
yet there's a pulling of my soul
that disregards all the warnings
I've futilely attempted to skirt...
I don't want to need you
yet here I am aimless n' alone
I find in you, my every comfort
with you I feel serenity n' at home
I fail at trying...
not to be touched by you
as determination escapes me
n' no matter where I seek shelter
bereft of your hold, I feel so empty...
I don't wanna love
still, I suffer in denial's view
I don't wanna give you love
yet, it's impossible not to fall
so deeply in love with you...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 31st Jul 2014
| Edited 19th Aug 2014
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Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 12:39pm
re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:52pm
Thank you sweetheart, I do agree with you :)
Appreciate your support always :)
Appreciate your support always :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 12:40pm
This is representational of the push and pull of romance.
I saw a lot of myself in this entry.
Good write Poet
I saw a lot of myself in this entry.
Good write Poet
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:53pm
Thanks bro. I'm sure we are not alone in this
some just don't want to acknowledge it! :)
Appreciate u much
some just don't want to acknowledge it! :)
Appreciate u much
Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:12pm
The battle of the memories of a scarred heart forever tattooed in the brain in battle with a heart that is not dead yet, or awakened by that one you speak of.
This is as real as it gets written very well.
This is as real as it gets written very well.
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:55pm
So true your words my friend! I'm grateful as always to have your support :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:17pm
Dear PM...
This pulls at my heart strings
Words so beautiful, so true
It'd be so easy to fall in love with you... :)
You are aptly named PM...
This pulls at my heart strings
Words so beautiful, so true
It'd be so easy to fall in love with you... :)
You are aptly named PM...
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 1:56pm
Aaaawwww gosh, you're making me blush!
Thank u baby! Muah!! lol humbled n honored
I am by your thoughts :)
Thank u baby! Muah!! lol humbled n honored
I am by your thoughts :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 3:37pm
re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 5:24pm
Ain't that the truth!? Thank you my dear friend
I truly appreciate your time n support always :)
I truly appreciate your time n support always :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 6:52pm
wonderful ink poetik...
"I don't wanna love
because I just can't bear the hurt
yet there's a pulling of my soul" know this feeling all too well..and i'm sure everyone at some point can relate
fav line:
"I fail at trying...
not to be touched by you" beautifully done
"I don't wanna love
because I just can't bear the hurt
yet there's a pulling of my soul" know this feeling all too well..and i'm sure everyone at some point can relate
fav line:
"I fail at trying...
not to be touched by you" beautifully done
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
31st Jul 2014 7:22pm
Aaaaawwwww well care to come closer so I can squeeze u in a bear hug? Lol so sweet my dearest! Thank u tons :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
You have been writing such sweet and heartfelt poetry lately and I love the emtionally honesty with which you lay yourself bare here.......♡♡♡ :)
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
1st Aug 2014 4:06am
Re: "Undeniable..."
1st Aug 2014 7:31am
this defines emotional nakedness
"just how it feels to fly...
I don't wanna love because I just can't bear the hurt
yet there's a pulling of my soul"
very relatable Poe and so well written
"just how it feels to fly...
I don't wanna love because I just can't bear the hurt
yet there's a pulling of my soul"
very relatable Poe and so well written
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
1st Aug 2014 1:03pm
My sweet Katja I can't express enough how
honored I always feel to have your support...
Truly grateful for your Mami, n yea I know you
relate :)
honored I always feel to have your support...
Truly grateful for your Mami, n yea I know you
relate :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
8th Aug 2014 9:36am
This must be it!
I don't want to need you
yet here I am aimless n' alone
I find in you, my every comfort
with you I feel serenity n' at home ...
Those lines says it best!Undeniably heartfelt!
I don't want to need you
yet here I am aimless n' alone
I find in you, my every comfort
with you I feel serenity n' at home ...
Those lines says it best!Undeniably heartfelt!
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
8th Aug 2014 12:31pm
WOW... You just touched my heart!
Thank you sweetheart, I deeply appreciate
your visit n thoughts on this piece :)
Thank you sweetheart, I deeply appreciate
your visit n thoughts on this piece :)
Re: "Undeniable..."
10th Aug 2014 1:01am
re: Re: "Undeniable..."
19th Aug 2014 1:53am
Love u too my sweet Broomie
But I sure hope u don't mind incestous love lol
Thank u :)
But I sure hope u don't mind incestous love lol
Thank u :)
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19th Aug 2014 3:58am
not sure but brotherly and sisterly love is always good in a healthy way!
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Re: "Undeniable..."
Anonymous
27th Aug 2014 4:31pm
Aye, a good raw piece of work.
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
27th Aug 2014 6:09pm
Re: "Undeniable..."
15th Nov 2014 3:04pm
Oh, so true... Would be better not to fall, but... A really good reading is to browse your ink, Poetic!
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re: Re: "Undeniable..."
15th Nov 2014 6:39pm
Aaaawwww... I'm soooo flattered, thank you much sweetheart!
I'm grateful for your time n thoughts... :)
I'm grateful for your time n thoughts... :)