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LUIS

[font=Lucida Sans Unicode,Lucida Grande]Luis
He told me that no ones ever made  “love” to him the way I just did,
That no ones ever kissed him so deep and passionately as I.
I left his legs quivering, took every inch of him. Slurped up every bit of his DNA.
He smothered me as I screamed, during my over dramatic climax, I scream “don’t stop”
My cunt throbbing and the dam inside of me is ready to give,
seconds after,
He lays drenched in me.
He glances at me, with his arrogant snickering smile, as if he just preformed something magical.
I must admit I feel a little bit of embarrassment, but I digress, because I have Daddy issues so..
somehow I feel this will prove to men that I’m worthwhile,
Acceptance is the only thing I’ve ever sough from the male critiques, starting with my father.
But that’s a whole other chapter in this book of men who have broken me.  
Luis sweetly places a kiss upon me.
I in return hand him his pants, and give him a sharp glance, nod and stare at the front door.
Hes a smart guys, and he “catches my drift”
Hes upset, he ask me why I don’t want him to stick around,
I reply, “what for? I already bust.”
He quickly gathers the rest of his things, his face, flushed red.
He feels embarrassed, just how I felt only momentarily, roles reversed.
He wraps his arms around me, gives me an awkward weird hug.
He passes threw my door way, as I hold the door open to get him out in a hurry.
He turns around, blurts out loudly as if trying embarrass me.
“Hey Roxy, that was a great fuck, lets do it again soon!”
I laugh, and instantly scream out my reply,
“Yeah, I’ll call you next time Im thinking about Juanny”
His face instantly ghost white, he opens his mouth, but nothing comes out,
I yell “Goodnight” and slam the door.
Now time to dream! because in my dreams is the only place
I can be with my
One and only Juanny.

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