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I Wade In You
I wade in thoughts
Of the beauty and serenity
In your face and emotions
I wade in exhilaration
Of the birth and newly discovered
Place thought barren
Brought back to life
By someone as beautiful as you
I drown in apprehension
If whether it will blossom and
Where it will lead us both
I wade in anticipation of
What you have brought about
With your words and
Inner smiles
I wade in you
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Of the beauty and serenity
In your face and emotions
I wade in exhilaration
Of the birth and newly discovered
Place thought barren
Brought back to life
By someone as beautiful as you
I drown in apprehension
If whether it will blossom and
Where it will lead us both
I wade in anticipation of
What you have brought about
With your words and
Inner smiles
I wade in you
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 28th Jul 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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28th Jul 2014 5:07pm
Probably the most beautiful thing I've read!
I wish everyone could feel this!
Excellent poem! Loved it!!! Thank you for sharing! :)
I wish everyone could feel this!
Excellent poem! Loved it!!! Thank you for sharing! :)
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28th Jul 2014 11:44pm
Stunning and breathless piece of beauty. Passion oozes from your gracious words. RL for me! Xo :)
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29th Jul 2014 1:17am
Wow! This is beautiful with such depth. A perfect description of the motions of falling in love. Loved it :)
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29th Jul 2014 2:31am
Aw, this was lovely, deary. Made me tear up a lil! :) Chicks dig this kinda ink. At least this chick does.
29th Jul 2014 4:13pm
Thank you mysteriouslady, that's exactly who I was writing it for. I am glad you dug it.
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29th Jul 2014 6:52am
My dear friend X u seem to have truly found ur Muse n some one. Lucky woman. Lucky u. Grt write hun
Love
Belle
Love
Belle
29th Jul 2014 4:16pm
29th Jul 2014 10:13am
Ah, xmar82, luv :-* ~
This piece is so multifaceted. It has such depth. You carefully address layers of beauty and emotion from the skin to that which flays us open from our primal core. It takes such courage to face ourselves in this way, I think.
You have done a magnificent job of it, luv! :-*
This piece is so multifaceted. It has such depth. You carefully address layers of beauty and emotion from the skin to that which flays us open from our primal core. It takes such courage to face ourselves in this way, I think.
You have done a magnificent job of it, luv! :-*
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2014 8:39pm
So intense, this is true poetry, levitating the words from their surface, a poem from and of the senses!
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