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In This Position
Torsos tangled together
positioned for deepest reach
sensations explode, overwhelm
I yell out a breathless screech
Heads thrown back in climax
nipples pointing in the air
your arms pull me in closer
push to depths beyond compare
Pulling me toward your hot wet mouth
you suckle each hard tip one by one
fingers slide over my swollen crux
and again you make my body come undone
With you still entombed deep inside of me
my arms grasp onto your shoulders so tight
clinging to you, I take a sinful ride
feels so good I could do this all night
positioned for deepest reach
sensations explode, overwhelm
I yell out a breathless screech
Heads thrown back in climax
nipples pointing in the air
your arms pull me in closer
push to depths beyond compare
Pulling me toward your hot wet mouth
you suckle each hard tip one by one
fingers slide over my swollen crux
and again you make my body come undone
With you still entombed deep inside of me
my arms grasp onto your shoulders so tight
clinging to you, I take a sinful ride
feels so good I could do this all night
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Re: In This Position
26th Jul 2014 7:59am
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26th Jul 2014 5:30pm
Re: In This Position
26th Jul 2014 8:48am
Poem well fits the pic (which, I notice, gives hope to less well endowed women) at verse two. The shift of positions throughout the act is well described; in verse three the mounted becomes the mounter.
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re: Re: In This Position
26th Jul 2014 5:32pm
poem written just for the picture
couldn't pass up the chance to write about it
found it very intriguing
couldn't pass up the chance to write about it
found it very intriguing
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27th Jul 2014 9:44am
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Re: In This Position
27th Jul 2014 1:43am
I read this many times hoping to find a favorite line but its too good to find a favorite and disregard the others...well crafted...sooooohhhh sexy
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27th Jul 2014 4:53am
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2014 9:59pm
Mmmmmmmm! Great sexy write. Enjoyed this much.....turning up the fan. LOL!! Xo :)

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27th Jul 2014 11:50pm
Re: In This Position
28th Jul 2014 11:16pm
Hot and erotic write. I think your becoming well versed in this area Deborahlee. Enjoyed.
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29th Jul 2014 2:23am
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29th Jul 2014 8:34pm
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29th Jul 2014 8:52pm
WOW, I bet you could Hot stuff!!LOL!
Great sexy write sweets!!
Pleasure too read!!
You ink well!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
Great sexy write sweets!!
Pleasure too read!!
You ink well!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
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29th Jul 2014 9:00pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 4:24am
Extraordinarily visual... wow.

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1st Aug 2014 4:31am
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 4:55am
Pleasure.

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Re: In This Position
10th Aug 2014 10:55pm
being inside is no sin
holding it for long
is all that one always does long
the hard hits few
we all love too
but then who is inside
we always wish twas you
and now lets bump
into the surface of the earth
as earthquakes cummmmmm
this is simply poetic sexy kingdom
no sinsome
holding it for long
is all that one always does long
the hard hits few
we all love too
but then who is inside
we always wish twas you
and now lets bump
into the surface of the earth
as earthquakes cummmmmm
this is simply poetic sexy kingdom
no sinsome
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Re: In This Position
28th Aug 2014 2:49pm
I like the whole composition but the upbeat is my favourite :"Torsos tangled together..."
:-)
:-)
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29th Aug 2014 00:37am