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Summer Rain
Come walk with me
In the warm summer rain
Country boy take my hand
Be led into my fantasy
Bed me down in wildflowers
Wet petals licking our skin
Dancing in time with our bodies
Lost in ethereal ecstasy
Me, your playful wood nymph
You, my mighty red oak
Salty drops fall from your glistening skin
That I ingest with ferocity
Torrents beat down harder
As do our racing hearts
One lone deafening thunder clap
Exclamates our eternal electricity
In the warm summer rain
Country boy take my hand
Be led into my fantasy
Bed me down in wildflowers
Wet petals licking our skin
Dancing in time with our bodies
Lost in ethereal ecstasy
Me, your playful wood nymph
You, my mighty red oak
Salty drops fall from your glistening skin
That I ingest with ferocity
Torrents beat down harder
As do our racing hearts
One lone deafening thunder clap
Exclamates our eternal electricity
Written by
lilsouthernbelle
Published 18th Jul 2014
| Edited 22nd Jul 2014
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18th Jul 2014 4:06pm
Re: Summer Rain
18th Jul 2014 4:52pm
Beautiful visuals in your words miss. Feeling I can almost recognize the surrounding scents as well. Awesome
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18th Jul 2014 4:53pm
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18th Jul 2014 8:43pm
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18th Jul 2014 8:39pm
Such a beautiful scene Belle. I can feel the cool rain drops hitting my soul. Awesome write.
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18th Jul 2014 8:46pm
Ty hun...this one was very inspired. I hope that u could feel that shine through
♥♥♥♥
Belle
♥♥♥♥
Belle
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2014 9:16pm
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18th Jul 2014 9:21pm
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2014 11:34pm
Belle,
Dang, I tell you what! Them old hay fields back home will never be the same again : ) Your words are like a cool skinny dip on a hot dry august day. Love the exclamation on this write!
tornado
Dang, I tell you what! Them old hay fields back home will never be the same again : ) Your words are like a cool skinny dip on a hot dry august day. Love the exclamation on this write!
tornado
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19th Jul 2014 4:02am
Careful what u do n those hayfields Tornado...u will end up with a rather itchy ass. Lol
So happy enjoyed my lil write
Hugs
Belld
So happy enjoyed my lil write
Hugs
Belld
Re: Summer Rain
Anonymous
19th Jul 2014 4:17am
This is sexy as hell! I see you've got al the sexy Cowboys ready to ride thru the meadows. LOL!!! Enjoyed this much. Pic is beautiful xo :)
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19th Jul 2014 5:14am
Lol....i dont know how ready anybody is to ride....lol Sweety im honored that u liked it so much. This pic actually my wallpaper now.
Luv ya
Belle
Luv ya
Belle
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2014 10:44am
beautiful sensual
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19th Jul 2014 3:32pm
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2014 5:27am
Excellent work
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