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Love'S Trick'd
POOF...
now you see it...
frown, you don't
POOF!
somehow you believed
intangibility, relieved it
POOF...
no magic in 'this-pair'
besieged with opened EYES
can't find it anywhere...
POOF!
that love you 'flew
high' upon
one second you tasted it,
next moment it's gone...
POOF!
now disintegration,
a realization...
So tricky love can be,
for more times than not
it's more like just a fantasy...
now you see it...
frown, you don't
POOF!
somehow you believed
intangibility, relieved it
POOF...
no magic in 'this-pair'
besieged with opened EYES
can't find it anywhere...
POOF!
that love you 'flew
high' upon
one second you tasted it,
next moment it's gone...
POOF!
now disintegration,
a realization...
So tricky love can be,
for more times than not
it's more like just a fantasy...
Published 18th Jul 2014
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18th Jul 2014 11:30am
18th Jul 2014 11:37am
Loved it PM...well described...is that good English??
At the moment I feel love is a fantasy though that could change in the next minute....,
That's how fickle it is.... :)
At the moment I feel love is a fantasy though that could change in the next minute....,
That's how fickle it is.... :)
18th Jul 2014 6:06pm
Why yes my dear it is... :) n thank you so much
for being so wonderful in supporting my ink... :)
for being so wonderful in supporting my ink... :)
18th Jul 2014 1:39pm
Love's like that. Its like 'now you see it now you don't'...but when you have it, heaven's done. Good read, Poetik.
19th Jul 2014 5:56am
Yea it is like that huh? Thank you my sweetness
Always grateful for your support my dear :)
Always grateful for your support my dear :)
Anonymous
18th Jul 2014 5:22pm
That fantasy world we strive to attain, cultivate and contain. nice write.
19th Jul 2014 6:07am
Sooooo true! Trying to find rhyme or reason general
is general an exercise in futility on matters of the heart!
Thank u my sweet lady :)
is general an exercise in futility on matters of the heart!
Thank u my sweet lady :)
18th Jul 2014 6:56pm
a very wise man once told me that it's out there... you just have to stop looking in the same places :)
much enjoyed
much enjoyed
19th Jul 2014 6:10am
Can't help looking where thd interests lie! lol
But yea I imagine that 'wise' man was onto something lol
Thank u so much my very sweet Katja, always :)
But yea I imagine that 'wise' man was onto something lol
Thank u so much my very sweet Katja, always :)
Anonymous
19th Jul 2014 4:23am
POOF......there.....I'm in luv with you! Sad rhyme I know.....but I tried. LOL!! Enjoyed this magic. Xo :)
19th Jul 2014 6:12am
Lmao you are huh? Wow what a compliment! lol
Thank u flower u sweetie pie! Appreciate u much :)
Thank u flower u sweetie pie! Appreciate u much :)
21st Jul 2014 8:04pm
tricky indeed,truly enjoyed this sir :)
"besieged with opened EYES
can't find it anywhere"this line instantly made me think of the song "love is blind"
"besieged with opened EYES
can't find it anywhere"this line instantly made me think of the song "love is blind"
22nd Jul 2014 9:52pm
