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Blanket of fog slowly
rolled over the pond
Early morning chill as
clouds hold pinkish yellows
Pigeons spring from the
old barn opening blue wings
Stone wall hides behind
vibrant green moss
That old thorn bush needs
to be chopped
In the distance the farm
tractor hums
Poetry holds on for one last
hug
While the days work strangles
the soul
rolled over the pond
Early morning chill as
clouds hold pinkish yellows
Pigeons spring from the
old barn opening blue wings
Stone wall hides behind
vibrant green moss
That old thorn bush needs
to be chopped
In the distance the farm
tractor hums
Poetry holds on for one last
hug
While the days work strangles
the soul
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Re: Work
15th Jul 2014 11:55am
I love the way you use imagery
You continue to amaze me because you are a total natural
Thank you for being here and gracing us with your smile and pen
You continue to amaze me because you are a total natural
Thank you for being here and gracing us with your smile and pen
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15th Jul 2014 12:29pm
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15th Jul 2014 11:57am
I love working out side the feel of the wet ground in the morning, the smell of the day beginning, the heat starting and the haze of a wonderful sweaty day, that yeilds bueaty to furbish the feilds. This poem touches me Tommie I love the way you brought me back to the good days ♥ thank you ♥
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15th Jul 2014 2:13pm
it's a beautiful setting, especially the old barn in the morning with the birds, I saw that clear as day...
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2014 5:05pm
Tommie Lynn,
A totally organic write of a magical part of the day! Enjoyed!
tornado
A totally organic write of a magical part of the day! Enjoyed!
tornado
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15th Jul 2014 5:14pm
Yes we must toil in the day to day of our lives. It's mundane work and I'd rather be writing but it has to be done. Enjoyed.
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15th Jul 2014 7:31pm
Tommie, once again you've spread before this reader a feast for the senses. I want to be there...that's wonderful writing. Bravisima bella poeta!
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17th Jul 2014 7:50pm
always chores to be done. a productive day makes us hungrier for poetry...
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