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Rainy days
Pouring rain and cloudy
Skies set the tone for our session
Tonight as thunder and lightening
Clap in the sky
The cars passing by
They Play audience to our love Making
Two wet naked bodies add to some slippery sensations out here on this fine rainy seductive day
Many will hide inside and nestle together make love by the fire
No no not Me and you, we will make love outside in the rain till the sky
Returns to bright blue
Raw hot sex in the rain
The thought turning my body wet
Making me lick my lips and gasp for breath
I want to taste your tongue with the heavens tears falling on our bodies
Tingling all over
Cold air but can't feel a thing
Only your hands in my hair
Holding my buttocks while you thrust into me against this cold brick wall
Seeing nothing but rain all over us adding more heat to our burning flame
The cars still watching envy in there eyes
Where reaching the top without even a rope as our guide
Just mind blowing sex in the rain
No shame just me and you
"Fucking" in the stormy rain..
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3rd Apr 2011 6:33pm
Love the raw heat of this poem..sex in the rain out in the open hot.. :) peace Crim
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3rd Apr 2011 6:34pm
Thankyou I wasn't to sure about this one it kinda jumps around to much but I didn't want to change anything I don't know why thank you again crim your such a sweetie ;)
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3rd Apr 2011 9:07pm
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3rd Apr 2011 9:24pm
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Rain???
3rd Apr 2011 9:19pm
Holding my buttocks while you thrust!!! Hehe, can I use that line? Wait, cant do that... Am male!
And here I am tryin to do a colabo with you, guess I'ma mess myself up behind the keyboard then!
And here I am tryin to do a colabo with you, guess I'ma mess myself up behind the keyboard then!
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3rd Apr 2011 9:24pm
Haha you will do fine whenever your ready let's do it slim.. And btw you can say while holding her buttocks and so on lol.. Thankyou for the read sweetie
um yea
4th Apr 2011 00:47am
I like the poem but in reality I don't want to read it from my sisters page just saying but other than that good job
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4th Apr 2011 00:57am
Haha thank you stay away from my erotics young one I'll disturb you lol.. Love you
I see and feel your words........
4th Apr 2011 2:27am
......love the imagery and how much you like the rain. This needs some music behind it. It would be excellent spoken word with the right reader. I'm reaching a point where I may be a bit "prejudiced" in my oppinions of your work. : )
This one is good.
This one is good.
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4th Apr 2011 2:33am
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4th Apr 2011 3:08am
now i know what fucks you give
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4th Apr 2011 3:28am
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4th Apr 2011 3:33am
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4th Apr 2011 6:06pm
nice
5th Apr 2011 3:18am
quite a picture you painted there..animalistic and instinctive.. making inanimate things wish they had life.
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9th Apr 2011 11:31pm
.......definitely adds a different dimension to the poem. Nice Touch. I will have to steal that idea ;)
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how is this one on some ones 9incher poem
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10th Apr 2011 3:02am
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10th Apr 2011 3:31am
u think
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11th Apr 2011 00:38am
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11th Apr 2011 2:23am
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..Should I Buy It?????......
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26th Jun 2011 11:18pm
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27th Jun 2011 10:46pm
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28th Jun 2011 6:56pm
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Re: Rainy days
11th Aug 2012 1:00pm
I love your voice...you should read more of your pieces. Such a sultry, seductive, scintillating listen.
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11th Aug 2012 2:15pm
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1st Sep 2012 4:23am
Damn! The heat from this read scorched my eye lids girl!!! Hot it is, yes yes yes
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