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'Time Capsule'
Flip a page
in a life chapter...
make a way
for that 'where after'
seek to see,
what wasn't seen before
take another trek
into that mind's store
for everything
that came to past
wouldn't you know it,
never lasted
whether good
or bad... mattered not
if possible time turned...
a new path, new plot
tell fate to take a hike,
far away real soon
while on it's way out...
far beyond the moon
another life walks
within those steps
in perfect harmony
singing to the tune
of what if's infamous rhapsody...
in a life chapter...
make a way
for that 'where after'
seek to see,
what wasn't seen before
take another trek
into that mind's store
for everything
that came to past
wouldn't you know it,
never lasted
whether good
or bad... mattered not
if possible time turned...
a new path, new plot
tell fate to take a hike,
far away real soon
while on it's way out...
far beyond the moon
another life walks
within those steps
in perfect harmony
singing to the tune
of what if's infamous rhapsody...
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Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 2:19pm
"if possible time turned...
a new path, new plot
tell fate to take a hike,
far away real soon
while on it's way out... "
loving this...added... :)
a new path, new plot
tell fate to take a hike,
far away real soon
while on it's way out... "
loving this...added... :)
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 2:23pm
Aaaawwwww thank you my dear!
Pleased you loved it n honored it made your RL. :)
Pleased you loved it n honored it made your RL. :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 2:41pm
If there was a parallel universe...it should be a better and happier place. My humble interpretation, good read poetik.:)
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 2:58pm
Thank you sweet Grace, I'm pleased you liked my piece
n forever grateful for your support :)
n forever grateful for your support :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 2:50pm
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9th Jul 2014 3:00pm
Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 5:12pm
"whether good
or bad... mattered not
if possible time turned...
a new path, new plot" oh so true!!!
absolutely loved this...Wonderful Ink Poetik!!!
or bad... mattered not
if possible time turned...
a new path, new plot" oh so true!!!
absolutely loved this...Wonderful Ink Poetik!!!
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 11:50pm
Aaaawww there she is! Hi my darling
happy to see u on my page as always n truly appreciate the RL add n support :)
happy to see u on my page as always n truly appreciate the RL add n support :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 5:54pm
"another life walks
within those steps
in perfect harmony
singing to the tune
of what if's infamous rhapsody..."<-fav.
This is amazing Poe! Incredible message...Xo
Pen love~
within those steps
in perfect harmony
singing to the tune
of what if's infamous rhapsody..."<-fav.
This is amazing Poe! Incredible message...Xo
Pen love~
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
10th Jul 2014 4:46am
You are the light on my page m sweet Rain
truly, I'm grateful always n forever for your continued support :)
truly, I'm grateful always n forever for your continued support :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
Anonymous
9th Jul 2014 6:02pm
As the journey beings, it knows no end, lovely write here!
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Re: 'Time Capsule'
9th Jul 2014 8:19pm
I read and re read PM because it is that good....
Parallel universe I believe there is.....
My life's pretty good over there not that it's not here...
It's just different....
Am just trying to get the balance.....
Maybe that's the secret.....
:)
Parallel universe I believe there is.....
My life's pretty good over there not that it's not here...
It's just different....
Am just trying to get the balance.....
Maybe that's the secret.....
:)
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
10th Jul 2014 2:34pm
Balance I believe wholeheartedly IS the secret
to everything! :) thank u my sweet K, I appreciate you much :)
to everything! :) thank u my sweet K, I appreciate you much :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
10th Jul 2014 10:55am
Poetikmind ~
You are such a marvelous poet! :-* The intricacies of your mind are engaging and amazing. Your lyricism is phenomenal. I see well that you are not solely an erotic ninja; I may well have to rename you... :-*
You are such a marvelous poet! :-* The intricacies of your mind are engaging and amazing. Your lyricism is phenomenal. I see well that you are not solely an erotic ninja; I may well have to rename you... :-*
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
10th Jul 2014 2:36pm
Lol aaaawwww nope I'm pretty much
whatever you wanna call me I have a habit
of changing up my style at the drop of a dime! lol
appreciate your sweet praise n support always
sweetheart :)
whatever you wanna call me I have a habit
of changing up my style at the drop of a dime! lol
appreciate your sweet praise n support always
sweetheart :)
Re: 'Time Capsule'
11th Jul 2014 3:46am
This is so mind probing and well written I love this place that you wrote from.
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re: Re: 'Time Capsule'
11th Jul 2014 12:31pm
Sweetness you make me blush BIG time! Thank you soooooo much, I truly appreciate you :)