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Shine On
Standing in your cinders
we were mystical
Spirals of smoke swirl
all around me
Like a burning wick
your light shines on
we were mystical
Spirals of smoke swirl
all around me
Like a burning wick
your light shines on
Published 7th Jul 2014
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7th Jul 2014 1:16pm
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7th Jul 2014 3:32pm
Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 3:53pm
Tommie Lynn,
The second burn from the flames is often the hottest! : ) Enjoyed!
tornado
The second burn from the flames is often the hottest! : ) Enjoyed!
tornado
7th Jul 2014 4:46pm
7th Jul 2014 4:46pm
Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 4:57pm
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7th Jul 2014 6:11pm
I can't thank you enough Jack. Your kind words are always appreciated. Your a bright light shining through a gray cloudy day.
Always enjoy your feedback and look forward to
future poetry collaborations with you. Thank you. Thank you. ;)
Always enjoy your feedback and look forward to
future poetry collaborations with you. Thank you. Thank you. ;)
7th Jul 2014 5:33pm
Feels like a memory of a fallen lover, still alive in your heart. It's sweet and ethereal. Enjoyed.
7th Jul 2014 6:13pm
Some lovers are remembered better than others. I give respect were it's due. Thank you xmar82 :)
