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Women
We are beautiful
We are enough
We are fire and ice
We are every emotion
From beginning to end
We are timid yet strong
We can be wild night's
With relaxing day's
We are beautiful
We are enough
We are fire and ice
We are every emotion
From beginning to end
We are timid yet strong
We can be wild night's
With relaxing day's
We are beautiful
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Re: Women
Anonymous
6th Jul 2014 7:51pm
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6th Jul 2014 7:59pm
I enjoy your comments Jack!
You always give me something to think about.
This write I just wanted to express how beautiful
every one of us women are. No matter size, shape,
race, tall or short. Everyone is different yet the same.
It's a bit harder for us women to be comfortable in
our own bodies...with all the glitz and glam out there
in the world we think we need to be a size zero. Not my cup of tea...I embrace my body...and I've never had any complaints.
As always I look forward to your words. Thank you ;)
You always give me something to think about.
This write I just wanted to express how beautiful
every one of us women are. No matter size, shape,
race, tall or short. Everyone is different yet the same.
It's a bit harder for us women to be comfortable in
our own bodies...with all the glitz and glam out there
in the world we think we need to be a size zero. Not my cup of tea...I embrace my body...and I've never had any complaints.
As always I look forward to your words. Thank you ;)
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2014 8:03pm
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6th Jul 2014 8:28pm
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6th Jul 2014 8:35pm
Re: Women
6th Jul 2014 8:30pm
You will get no arguments from me! I agree completely and I must say that I have been working on a poem on this very subject myself. Enjoyed it.
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6th Jul 2014 8:36pm
Re: Women
6th Jul 2014 8:31pm
deadlier than the male, for sure!
your poem & the photo ignite the last skyrockets of the Fourth of July...
your poem & the photo ignite the last skyrockets of the Fourth of July...
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re: Re: Women
6th Jul 2014 8:37pm
Re: Women
The pic goes very well with this poem and I agree with your first comments - this girl embodies 'Perfect 10' not 'Size Zero' (thinking of song by The Beautiful South, one of whose lines goes "I wanna hold what I can see"!) She looks the stuff of "wild nights"! She is "enough"!
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re: Re: Women
6th Jul 2014 8:53pm
An excellent comment SS!
And a perfect lyric..."I wanna hold what I can see."
Thank you for your feedback. :)
And a perfect lyric..."I wanna hold what I can see."
Thank you for your feedback. :)
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6th Jul 2014 10:07pm
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7th Jul 2014 2:26am
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7th Jul 2014 5:18am
Re: Women
7th Jul 2014 6:17am
She pictured would match this description from the Song of Songs, chapter 7:
"Your navel is a rounded goblet of wine.
Your waist is a mound of wheat encircled by lilies.
Your breasts are like two fauns of a gazelle.
Your neck is like an ivory tower.
Your eyes are the pools of Heshbon..
Your nose is like the tower of Lebanon looking towards Damascus.
Your head crowns you like Mount Carmel.
Your hair is like royal tapestry...
How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights!
...your breasts like clusters of fruit.
I said, "I will climb the palm tree; I will take hold of its fruit".
May your breasts be like the clusters of the vine..."
"Your navel is a rounded goblet of wine.
Your waist is a mound of wheat encircled by lilies.
Your breasts are like two fauns of a gazelle.
Your neck is like an ivory tower.
Your eyes are the pools of Heshbon..
Your nose is like the tower of Lebanon looking towards Damascus.
Your head crowns you like Mount Carmel.
Your hair is like royal tapestry...
How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights!
...your breasts like clusters of fruit.
I said, "I will climb the palm tree; I will take hold of its fruit".
May your breasts be like the clusters of the vine..."
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re: Re: Women
7th Jul 2014 1:20pm
Now that's beautiful! Pure poetry! Thank you for sharing that SS. That was just what I needed to read on this lovely morning. ;)